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Array ( [sid] => 81790 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Part of me [time] => 2005-01-27 19:44:57 [hometext] => You tell me what you think of this, I like it, I think it explains a lot about me, maybe others can relate:S [bodytext] => Part of me says to move
Another part says to stay
Part of me is trying to sooth
All of my pain away

Part of me is crying deep down
While part of me laughs with cheer
Part of me's trying to find the sound
That no ear can ever hear

Part of me shines so brightly
While part of me remains dull
Part of me keeps my secrets tightly
Even though that's breaking my soul

Part of me screams at the top of its lungs
Another part stays quiet alone
Part of me hears my secrets from so many tongues
Althought I'm very well unknown

Part of my soul is black
And another part is white
Part of my heart is cracked
While the rest is together so tight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 61 [informant] => dreamer_for_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Part of me

Contributed by dreamer_for_eternity on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Part of me says to move
Another part says to stay
Part of me is trying to sooth
All of my pain away

Part of me is crying deep down
While part of me laughs with cheer
Part of me's trying to find the sound
That no ear can ever hear

Part of me shines so brightly
While part of me remains dull
Part of me keeps my secrets tightly
Even though that's breaking my soul

Part of me screams at the top of its lungs
Another part stays quiet alone
Part of me hears my secrets from so many tongues
Althought I'm very well unknown

Part of my soul is black
And another part is white
Part of my heart is cracked
While the rest is together so tight

Copyright © dreamer_for_eternity ... [ 2005-01-27 19:44:57]
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Re: Part of me (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:18:55 PM AEST
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Very nice poem,
All who have felt the emotions of love,hate happiness,sadness,a sesne of lonliness
emptiness and traped within a void while the realities of the world move round us just beyond our touch can relate to your words.
But just as in pandora's box, hope remained,within our hearts,as long as love remains there is always hope for a better tomorrow.
sojourner,

Re: Part of me (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:24:30 PM AEST
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Strong write..It has enough of what is needed to make something here good..

Re: Part of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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I agree with sojouner and afterdark on this. I wrote something similar recently about all my *parts* although that was a little more, um, detailed. Anyway, this has a soothing rhythm. Keep writing! Cheers!

Re: Part of me (User Rating: 1 )
by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:53:41 PM AEST
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ver powerful i liked it alot. keep writing

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