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And you leave me all alone
Away from what you’ve said
Away from what you’ll do.

You said you wanted more
you didn't want me anymore
You pushed my away
And you do it every day.

So Why

Did you think you were alone
Didn’t you pick of the ringing phone
Did you what to feel alone
Didn’t you let your love be shown.

You said you still loved me
Then why’d you set me free
You said you’d always care
And that you’d be there.

And when you feel alone again
And you wonder where I am
I’ll still be by your side
I’ll never try to hide.
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So Why

Contributed by dalamar on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:50:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

When all is said and done
And you leave me all alone
Away from what you’ve said
Away from what you’ll do.

You said you wanted more
you didn't want me anymore
You pushed my away
And you do it every day.

So Why

Did you think you were alone
Didn’t you pick of the ringing phone
Did you what to feel alone
Didn’t you let your love be shown.

You said you still loved me
Then why’d you set me free
You said you’d always care
And that you’d be there.

And when you feel alone again
And you wonder where I am
I’ll still be by your side
I’ll never try to hide.

Copyright © dalamar ... [ 2005-01-27 13:50:46]
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Re: So Why (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingkk05 on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:57:20 PM AEST
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I lvoe this poem so much it's not even funny it's so good please pm so we can talk if you want oo.
Kristin

Re: So Why (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:04:18 PM AEST
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Very nice.
I really liked this poem
MUAH

*~givingin~*

Re: So Why (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:10:31 PM AEST
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i enjoyed reading this poem.

Re: So Why (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:26:40 PM AEST
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this is beautiful. the flow amazed me. i hope to read more soon

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