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i devote my life
with out caring
i begin a new strife
without warning
i cant live without
without love
i cast others out
without emotions
i hurt those i love most
without stopping
i smoke my way into an overdose
without sleep
i let the fear take over
without rest
the high ages older
without thought
i move to another
without consiteration
it becomes my older brother
without caring
i start a new strife
without wanting
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i devote my life

Contributed by nightwolf on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 12:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

without wanting
i devote my life
with out caring
i begin a new strife
without warning
i cant live without
without love
i cast others out
without emotions
i hurt those i love most
without stopping
i smoke my way into an overdose
without sleep
i let the fear take over
without rest
the high ages older
without thought
i move to another
without consiteration
it becomes my older brother
without caring
i start a new strife
without wanting
i devote my life

Copyright © nightwolf ... [ 2005-01-27 12:10:11]
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Re: i devote my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:33:41 PM AEST
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I liked how this poem was structured...with the short and sweet lines...this poem flowed very well in my opinion

Re: i devote my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:36:36 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this, it was easy to read, but it was such a truthful and powerful message. I also liked the end how you repeated. Good job sweetie.

Re: i devote my life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:54:01 PM AEST
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Wow friend this is ad but written very well.
Please get help from your Dr. Medication keeps me sane. Also the natural herb.
P.m. me anytime.
Keep writing as writing helps.
luv, hugg, prayer, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
Hang tuff dear friend.

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