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I am looking
But I just can’t see
My eyes are open
Maybe I just don’t believe
I’m a determined person
Somehow I have lost my faith
How much longer must I endure
These tests I have to take?

I am listening
But I just can’t hear
My ears are open
So what gives?
I am always alert
I try to be on time
What exactly is it about me
That I insist on trying to hide?

I am touching
But can’t feel anything
My hands are moving
My heart just doesn’t feel
My emotions are confused
Not sure what to do
How can I feel the life I live?
The way I used to?

Erik Bützin
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Sense-less Emotions

Contributed by rhino33 on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:58:34 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Sense-Less Emotions
I am looking
But I just can’t see
My eyes are open
Maybe I just don’t believe
I’m a determined person
Somehow I have lost my faith
How much longer must I endure
These tests I have to take?

I am listening
But I just can’t hear
My ears are open
So what gives?
I am always alert
I try to be on time
What exactly is it about me
That I insist on trying to hide?

I am touching
But can’t feel anything
My hands are moving
My heart just doesn’t feel
My emotions are confused
Not sure what to do
How can I feel the life I live?
The way I used to?

Erik Bützin




Copyright © rhino33 ... [ 2005-01-27 10:58:34]
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Re: Sense-less Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:27:42 AM AEST
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There are those out there who feel flawed in some sense while others seem to walk blindly throughout life. And just when you think there is nothing to stir emotions, a ton of bricks lands proverbially upon the head to show otherwise. Fantastic write and I feel there is so much within it.

peace
TS




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