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Array ( [sid] => 81689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost love [time] => 2005-01-27 07:30:16 [hometext] => This poem is to the on that i truly love and will always love. She was worth more to me than anything in this world. [bodytext] => Hello,
Hello, anyone there
Okay I am alone
If the person who I love
Gets this poem
I am thinking about dieing

You really helped me
Get my life back
After losing my best friend
All hopes were gone

I was sitting on bed
With the barrel of gun,
In my mouth
Wanting to end the pain
That I was going through

I tried it once
The gun did not work
I tried again
And again,
The gun did not work
So I tried a third time
And again,
The gun did not work

Was this a sign?
Or was it faith?
Or could it have been,
My best friend stopping me

I am still not sure
What it was
But all I know
Is that I am glad I failed

For if I have succeeded
I would not have meet you
That week before
We started dating

I really thought,
About doing it again
But something in side
Told me not too!
I am still not sure
To this day what it was
But I am glad
It made me stop

Then I finally
Saw the light
It was coming from you
I figured I better take a chance
And so I did

And you said yes
And I started to cry
Because I thought I found you
November 19th
Is forever implanted
In my head

It is on that day
We made it official
That you were my girl-friend

And on that day
I took you out
For our first,
And many more to come

I picked you up at five p.m.
With three yellow red tip roses
That you said were you’re favorite
I took you to margaritas
Were you enjoyed?
The chicken fajita salad
And a non alcoholic strawberry daiquiri

After that I took you
To the movies
Flagship cinema
Were we saw the Grudge
Then I got you home,
By eleven thirty-five

We both said that we enjoyed
Each others company
I still did not kiss you
Even though I wanted to
I waited until
Our third date
Which was Sunday the twenty-first?
Remember that day
I walked you to your house

And just before you went in
I asked if I could kiss you
And you said yes

All these things
That I have mentioned today
Are things,
Those men,
Don’t even remember

But for those who remember
Are those who are in love!

And know it’s over
Why I am still not sure
But all I know
Is that
The time I spent with you
Was the best time of my life!

I just hope,
That one day,
You can save me again
And we could be,
In love again

What can I say?
You are my shooting star.

By: Adam Pomerleau
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Lost love

Contributed by deablo on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:30:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Hello,
Hello, anyone there
Okay I am alone
If the person who I love
Gets this poem
I am thinking about dieing

You really helped me
Get my life back
After losing my best friend
All hopes were gone

I was sitting on bed
With the barrel of gun,
In my mouth
Wanting to end the pain
That I was going through

I tried it once
The gun did not work
I tried again
And again,
The gun did not work
So I tried a third time
And again,
The gun did not work

Was this a sign?
Or was it faith?
Or could it have been,
My best friend stopping me

I am still not sure
What it was
But all I know
Is that I am glad I failed

For if I have succeeded
I would not have meet you
That week before
We started dating

I really thought,
About doing it again
But something in side
Told me not too!
I am still not sure
To this day what it was
But I am glad
It made me stop

Then I finally
Saw the light
It was coming from you
I figured I better take a chance
And so I did

And you said yes
And I started to cry
Because I thought I found you
November 19th
Is forever implanted
In my head

It is on that day
We made it official
That you were my girl-friend

And on that day
I took you out
For our first,
And many more to come

I picked you up at five p.m.
With three yellow red tip roses
That you said were you’re favorite
I took you to margaritas
Were you enjoyed?
The chicken fajita salad
And a non alcoholic strawberry daiquiri

After that I took you
To the movies
Flagship cinema
Were we saw the Grudge
Then I got you home,
By eleven thirty-five

We both said that we enjoyed
Each others company
I still did not kiss you
Even though I wanted to
I waited until
Our third date
Which was Sunday the twenty-first?
Remember that day
I walked you to your house

And just before you went in
I asked if I could kiss you
And you said yes

All these things
That I have mentioned today
Are things,
Those men,
Don’t even remember

But for those who remember
Are those who are in love!

And know it’s over
Why I am still not sure
But all I know
Is that
The time I spent with you
Was the best time of my life!

I just hope,
That one day,
You can save me again
And we could be,
In love again

What can I say?
You are my shooting star.

By: Adam Pomerleau




Copyright © deablo ... [ 2005-01-27 07:30:16]
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Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by only4das on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:26:22 AM AEST
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This is a really sweet poem...not many guys remember dates...LOL. It's nice to see that the ones that do...actually exist...just kidding...but this is a really sweet poem!


Re: Lost love (User Rating: 1 )
by pURePOISON on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:48:24 PM AEST
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PLEASE! please please I beg of you...USE SPELL CHECK!!! other than that i think its sweet... oh and work on the math skills please!




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