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Array ( [sid] => 81677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Is You [time] => 2005-01-27 03:25:38 [hometext] => To a special, wonderful friend... I love ya!!! [bodytext] => Someone like you
Deserves the best
The best guy to treat you right
The best of friends to call late at night
The best job that pays well
So you are stuck working so hard
You need more time
To take care of yourself
Take time off of work
And clear your mind
Don't dwell on the past
But look up ahead
And that is where you will see
People who care

They aren't there for them
They are there for you
To support your decisions
And help you get through
All your struggles and problems
Great ideas and accomplishments
They will be with you every step of the way

You are pretty on the inside and out
A brilliant mind with talent so great
You share with the world
Your mind, heart, and soul
Anyone who would dislike you
Would be a fool

If I had to describe you
This is what I would say
You clearly fit the description
In every single way

Of course you might be blushing
Or laughing out loud
But doesn't your talent
Make you proud
This is what you
Are all about

So go enjoy life
Have some fun
Remember you are number one
Throw a party
Go out dancing
Drink all night

Later when you're in the future
Look back on the day when you set yourself free
Partied, danced, and drank all in the same night
And maybe you will realize
It helps you be more relaxed [comments] => 7 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

This Is You

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:25:38 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Someone like you
Deserves the best
The best guy to treat you right
The best of friends to call late at night
The best job that pays well
So you are stuck working so hard
You need more time
To take care of yourself
Take time off of work
And clear your mind
Don't dwell on the past
But look up ahead
And that is where you will see
People who care

They aren't there for them
They are there for you
To support your decisions
And help you get through
All your struggles and problems
Great ideas and accomplishments
They will be with you every step of the way

You are pretty on the inside and out
A brilliant mind with talent so great
You share with the world
Your mind, heart, and soul
Anyone who would dislike you
Would be a fool

If I had to describe you
This is what I would say
You clearly fit the description
In every single way

Of course you might be blushing
Or laughing out loud
But doesn't your talent
Make you proud
This is what you
Are all about

So go enjoy life
Have some fun
Remember you are number one
Throw a party
Go out dancing
Drink all night

Later when you're in the future
Look back on the day when you set yourself free
Partied, danced, and drank all in the same night
And maybe you will realize
It helps you be more relaxed

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-01-27 03:25:38]
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Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:02:01 AM AEST
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what a great friend you are to write such a great poem to your friend.well done.

Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:04:19 AM AEST
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great job..

Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:06:57 AM AEST
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Amy, this is just beautiful and sweet. You're freind is so lucky to have you.
And yes it's time to party girl.
Good write Amy im proud of you for writing this wonderfull poem.

Jane x

Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:59:59 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
huggs,
emy

Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:00:03 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
huggs,
emy

Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:57:19 AM AEST
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I really liked this one girl, you are becoming quite the writer!

Re: This Is You (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:06:45 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so sweet Amy. Your friend is very lucky to have you.
We are very lucky to have you here at YPDC too.
Always keep writing. K?
*hugs tons* Phil xxx

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