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These blood stained hands
Unable to wash away what taints them
Unable to erase the mistakes
That led to all of your pain

These tear stained hands
Unable to wipe the reasons for them
Unable to shift the blame
To the one who deserves the shame

These inked stained hands
Unable to blot away what poisons them
Unable to write your pain away
But able to write what I meant to say

And what I meant to say is
That I'm glad my hands are unable to do all of this
Because it causes you pain [comments] => 7 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Write Your Pain Away

Contributed by essentially9 on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:22:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Write Your Pain Away

These blood stained hands
Unable to wash away what taints them
Unable to erase the mistakes
That led to all of your pain

These tear stained hands
Unable to wipe the reasons for them
Unable to shift the blame
To the one who deserves the shame

These inked stained hands
Unable to blot away what poisons them
Unable to write your pain away
But able to write what I meant to say

And what I meant to say is
That I'm glad my hands are unable to do all of this
Because it causes you pain

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-26 21:22:45]
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Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:59:01 PM AEST
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I'm not sure it should be "all of this." I actually think "all this" will do. Otherwise, this is stellar, interesting, and fulfilling to read.
Stitch

Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:06:00 PM AEST
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This is another well written post..The last stanza with the first stand out to me..I love this.

Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:06:43 PM AEST
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The title caught my attention right away..I really liked this, and I relate to it a lot. Great job. I think one of the main reasons people write is just to 'write their pain away'..again, I loved the title, and the poem lol. Keep it up

Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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The exact reason I write, to ease my pain...
Great write, like always...

Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:54:42 AM AEST
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I like the theme of this peice. It was simple yet deep and meaningful. I really enjoyed the last two stanzas.

Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:10:34 AM AEST
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It is good to write down your pain.sometimes its healing to write things down.
great write.

Re: Write Your Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:51:28 PM AEST
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I have written many times to ease my pain. Somehow, the pain keeps coming back. Thanks for posting this Jennifer.

Bruce

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