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You have not seen the world from my eyes
An expensive collage and a B.H.D.
So lucky an I to have my G.E.D.
Ellegant word in mind and pen
I search struggle and end with him
Simple word I put my thought through
This would never do for someone as you
Educated by the finest scholar
I feel like a cat or dog my mind is collard
Comments I get and deeply appericate
You look at me,but don't feel my fate
Uneducated this silly fool
He doesn't know the pen is a tool
Perhaps one should be a little contrite
I am especially pleased when children write I earned no degree in this working world Unlike you I am no scholar Mr.mr.you write so cool
Everything is so understood

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Lofty Thoughts and Little words

Contributed by Sinned on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

How I write you critize
You have not seen the world from my eyes
An expensive collage and a B.H.D.
So lucky an I to have my G.E.D.
Ellegant word in mind and pen
I search struggle and end with him
Simple word I put my thought through
This would never do for someone as you
Educated by the finest scholar
I feel like a cat or dog my mind is collard
Comments I get and deeply appericate
You look at me,but don't feel my fate
Uneducated this silly fool
He doesn't know the pen is a tool
Perhaps one should be a little contrite
I am especially pleased when children write I earned no degree in this working world Unlike you I am no scholar Mr.mr.you write so cool
Everything is so understood

Sinned

Copyright © Sinned ... [ 2005-01-26 12:23:13]
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Re: Lofty Thoughts and Little words (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:44:03 PM AEST
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I have a tendency to point out spelling, because of my English teacher background, but the substance of the write is ALWAYS more important.
Stitch

Re: Lofty Thoughts and Little words (User Rating: 1 )
by marshmalloska on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:57:41 PM AEST
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good poem, i liked the title best of all though!

Re: Lofty Thoughts and Little words (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:52:14 AM AEST
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it is only through a mind one can acknowledge poetry... it is only by heart and soul one may breath it. hugs n' love nessa

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