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a satisfying glee that never comes out
my escentric mind of over-obsession
a love that drives me goes into resession
lift me away from my iridesent glow
to the point of extinction where no one will know
love points the way that no one will go
so i will sit in my chair of dispair
wanting your voice to throw me down stares
wanting this day to burden unfair
a rickety houseing of broken dreams and thoughts
you tought me to love;
at least that's what I thought
all the days i've sat by to wait for a call
but no one is there for me to catch when i fall
there is no reason to have my own say
there is no reason i shouldn't love you on this very day [comments] => 2 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 39 [informant] => j-man [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

aniversery

Contributed by j-man on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:57:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

harsh words from a harsh mouth
a satisfying glee that never comes out
my escentric mind of over-obsession
a love that drives me goes into resession
lift me away from my iridesent glow
to the point of extinction where no one will know
love points the way that no one will go
so i will sit in my chair of dispair
wanting your voice to throw me down stares
wanting this day to burden unfair
a rickety houseing of broken dreams and thoughts
you tought me to love;
at least that's what I thought
all the days i've sat by to wait for a call
but no one is there for me to catch when i fall
there is no reason to have my own say
there is no reason i shouldn't love you on this very day

Copyright © j-man ... [ 2005-01-26 00:57:50]
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Re: aniversery (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:27:00 AM AEST
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First of all you hit a nerve with me with your spelling..Now I say this due to the fact I was an English major in college.Way back when..However your poem is not terrible but it is not what it should be..Your feelings to me were not expressed as they could have been..

Re: aniversery (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:45:36 PM AEST
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I thought it was good.
oh well we all have our own opinions.

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