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Array ( [sid] => 81521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Someone's Gone [time] => 2005-01-26 00:34:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She's teased at school
She walks home
Staring at her tear stricken face in the pool
Sad and alone
Watching it grow closer, she closes her eyes
Takes a deep breath, preparing for the dive
Her life went wrong
She tips forward silence screams
"Someone's Gone"

He's popular and loved
But something's always missing
Today he made an important choice
He's screaming so much he's lost his voice
He downs 11 pills
He sits down and becomes still
The look in his eyes fades away
Memories of his happiest days
His life went wrong
Finally the look dies out
The emptiness in his eyes seem to shout
"Someone's Gone"

She stands at the brink of the ledge
Remembering all the times she's been at the edge
All the times she's tried to die
Are all the times she's tried to fly
She jumps and falls
The sickening crack at the bottom
Alerts the sky
"Another one wanted to die"
Her life went wrong
And now Someone's Gone

His parents beat him
He knows he'll never win
He takes that blade
Thinking of the decision he made
And slits his wrists
His soul pours onto the floor
He's lost inside this dying bliss
As his soul empties from his corpse
It dries and it's a while before he's found
His life went wrong
And now Someone's Gone

She sits in the car
In a dark empty room
The keys in her hand
She turns on the engine
The exhaust slowly fills up this place
Her life went wrong
When they find her the look on her face says
"Someone's Gone"

Hands shaking he gets the gun
Knowing this is the last time he'll see the sun
He looks up to the sky
Knowing he's about to die
He slowly pulls the trigger
The hole in his heart just got bigger
His life had gone wrong
Now Someone's Gone

Someone loved these kids
And now they're gone
Living without them seems wrong
My life never took a turn for the worst
I loved my friends so much I thought my heart would burst
The cries from my broken heart are screaming
"Someone's Gone" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 36 [informant] => blueeyedevil13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Someone's Gone

Contributed by blueeyedevil13 on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:34:56 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She's teased at school
She walks home
Staring at her tear stricken face in the pool
Sad and alone
Watching it grow closer, she closes her eyes
Takes a deep breath, preparing for the dive
Her life went wrong
She tips forward silence screams
"Someone's Gone"

He's popular and loved
But something's always missing
Today he made an important choice
He's screaming so much he's lost his voice
He downs 11 pills
He sits down and becomes still
The look in his eyes fades away
Memories of his happiest days
His life went wrong
Finally the look dies out
The emptiness in his eyes seem to shout
"Someone's Gone"

She stands at the brink of the ledge
Remembering all the times she's been at the edge
All the times she's tried to die
Are all the times she's tried to fly
She jumps and falls
The sickening crack at the bottom
Alerts the sky
"Another one wanted to die"
Her life went wrong
And now Someone's Gone

His parents beat him
He knows he'll never win
He takes that blade
Thinking of the decision he made
And slits his wrists
His soul pours onto the floor
He's lost inside this dying bliss
As his soul empties from his corpse
It dries and it's a while before he's found
His life went wrong
And now Someone's Gone

She sits in the car
In a dark empty room
The keys in her hand
She turns on the engine
The exhaust slowly fills up this place
Her life went wrong
When they find her the look on her face says
"Someone's Gone"

Hands shaking he gets the gun
Knowing this is the last time he'll see the sun
He looks up to the sky
Knowing he's about to die
He slowly pulls the trigger
The hole in his heart just got bigger
His life had gone wrong
Now Someone's Gone

Someone loved these kids
And now they're gone
Living without them seems wrong
My life never took a turn for the worst
I loved my friends so much I thought my heart would burst
The cries from my broken heart are screaming
"Someone's Gone"




Copyright © blueeyedevil13 ... [ 2005-01-26 00:34:56]
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Re: Someone's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:47:54 AM AEST
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This is heart breaking sad yet a masterpeice as it's happening every day. These writes break my heart but we need more of them as it's sadly reality.
Keep writing as your writing is amazing.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Someone's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 02:43:18 AM AEST
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wow,i had tears in my eyes. this was beautiful,the emotion expressed throughout the writing was heartbreaking.
great work very intense.

~keep the faith~
BB


Re: Someone's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Mandy2007 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:41:09 PM AEST
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OMG! i loved this one, i had tears in my eyes all the way through it! It's hard loosing all your friends to the same thing, suicide. Feel free to e mail me if you want to talk.




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