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Array ( [sid] => 81465 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the unknown [time] => 2005-01-25 18:07:18 [hometext] => to any one who has had a small connection with the supernatural [bodytext] => i dont know where i was
or how i got there
but i felt a presence
from i dont know where
a brush on my shoulder
but no one around
i stopped and listend
but there was no sound
i made it home
and lay awake in bed
then i felt a hand
brush my forhead
i looked around
there was no but me
then i felt the hand
rest on my knee
i looked
and it was gone
so i lay there and wait
until dawn
i stil felt the presence
that i could not see
and at that moment i knew
it was sent to protect me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 49 [informant] => nightwolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

the unknown

Contributed by nightwolf on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

i dont know where i was
or how i got there
but i felt a presence
from i dont know where
a brush on my shoulder
but no one around
i stopped and listend
but there was no sound
i made it home
and lay awake in bed
then i felt a hand
brush my forhead
i looked around
there was no but me
then i felt the hand
rest on my knee
i looked
and it was gone
so i lay there and wait
until dawn
i stil felt the presence
that i could not see
and at that moment i knew
it was sent to protect me

Copyright © nightwolf ... [ 2005-01-25 18:07:18]
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Re: the unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:43:27 PM AEST
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That, is one awesome poem. I love the way it rhymes, and how at first (to me) it seemed as if the "presence" was out to hurt you, but in the end you knew it was sent to protect you. Truly Marvelous(sp?).

Re: the unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:34:50 PM AEST
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I guess I missed this one. Thought I read um all. Now, I'm more conveinced of the question I asked in p.m.
I'm sure it was an angel sent to protect u 'cause someone was probably weeping and praying for u.
also someone could have been astro projecting themselves to reach u.
My son use to have some tapes that teeach u how from one of his Army buddies. it's amazing the things a person can learn in their solitude and boredom.
this is the best one out of all the writes u've posted.
5 big ones for U. i could tell u some super natural things that could scare the **** out of the devil but they don't scare me 'cause as a child my mom was an apostolic minister that had the faith of Job.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: the unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:30:54 PM AEST
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ive been there too, beautiful expression of everything:) hugs n' love nessa

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