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Array ( [sid] => 81453 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remembering [time] => 2005-01-25 16:55:13 [hometext] => Remembering can be a horrible thing...especially if it's about a loved one... [bodytext] => I remember the feeling as the first stupid words came out of my mouth
How you looked at me like i was on something
It hurt so bad
Like falling off a cliff and plumetting

Few days later we spoke again (in directly of course)
Your friend said you liked me
Then you came and asked me properly
My heart skipped a beat, this was too good to be

I look back now and see all i did was sit stupidly listening to your macho talk
I was just the thing that looked desent enough
Just sitting there nodding to what you said
It's not like it was tough

Slowly the relationship disintigrated
Fading away
I called you
You told me to go home and shut up in your own way

So here we are two years on
Me still thinking, remembering
You still forgetting
Just not letting go

I wanted to tell you in the best possible way that i love you
and you dont
so i tell you now
in this suicide note...

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Dying_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Remembering

Contributed by Dying_Angel on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I remember the feeling as the first stupid words came out of my mouth
How you looked at me like i was on something
It hurt so bad
Like falling off a cliff and plumetting

Few days later we spoke again (in directly of course)
Your friend said you liked me
Then you came and asked me properly
My heart skipped a beat, this was too good to be

I look back now and see all i did was sit stupidly listening to your macho talk
I was just the thing that looked desent enough
Just sitting there nodding to what you said
It's not like it was tough

Slowly the relationship disintigrated
Fading away
I called you
You told me to go home and shut up in your own way

So here we are two years on
Me still thinking, remembering
You still forgetting
Just not letting go

I wanted to tell you in the best possible way that i love you
and you dont
so i tell you now
in this suicide note...

Copyright © Dying_Angel ... [ 2005-01-25 16:55:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Remembering (User Rating: 1 )
by Keila on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:09:52 PM AEST
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T.T i hope your not serious

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