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words couldnt save me
from the blade

this time
suicide seemed easiest
suicide looked like the answer
the answer to my misery

this time
promises Id made
were broken
like my mind

this time
the thought of you
couldnt keep the pen in my hands
and keep me from slitting my wrist

this time
the thought of my friends crying
over my cold and dead body
didnt make me want to live

this time
the thought of you
couldnt keep me from hurting myself
its not your fault though

this time
i cut myself
despite my morals and values

this time
was different

next time
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This time

Contributed by crazylady on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

this time
words couldnt save me
from the blade

this time
suicide seemed easiest
suicide looked like the answer
the answer to my misery

this time
promises Id made
were broken
like my mind

this time
the thought of you
couldnt keep the pen in my hands
and keep me from slitting my wrist

this time
the thought of my friends crying
over my cold and dead body
didnt make me want to live

this time
the thought of you
couldnt keep me from hurting myself
its not your fault though

this time
i cut myself
despite my morals and values

this time
was different

next time
will not be

Copyright © crazylady ... [ 2005-01-25 13:17:37]
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Re: This time (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:31:28 PM AEST
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You know I love poems about suicide or failed attempts at it..Why is it so hard to do? The fact that people write about it so much here and other places makes me wanna pull a Slyvia Plath on myself.

Re: This time (User Rating: 1 )
by crazylady on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:43:53 PM AEST
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slyvia plaith?

Re: This time (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:50:33 AM AEST
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sylvia plath is a poet who killed herself. she was married to ted hughes who is also a poet.

i liked this poem, simple but expressive x

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