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I wonder if some other day,
A time will come when
She shall want to stay.

For in the scheme of many things,
She is the answer to my dreams.
And with the fiddle of my heart,
She plays it with such style and art.

I’d follow her wherever she went,
And not back down till my life was spent.
I’m glad the day our paths did mix.
Since then she’s been my greatest fix.

Often at her I do stare.
She knows how much I love and care.
And when my eyes have had their fill,
They’ll come back for more and she knows they will.

It doesn’t bother her to see,
Me looking at her longingly.
She always seems to know my mind,
And promises someday to be mine!

robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…

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SOMEDAY!

Contributed by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 03:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Each time I watch her walk away,
I wonder if some other day,
A time will come when
She shall want to stay.

For in the scheme of many things,
She is the answer to my dreams.
And with the fiddle of my heart,
She plays it with such style and art.

I’d follow her wherever she went,
And not back down till my life was spent.
I’m glad the day our paths did mix.
Since then she’s been my greatest fix.

Often at her I do stare.
She knows how much I love and care.
And when my eyes have had their fill,
They’ll come back for more and she knows they will.

It doesn’t bother her to see,
Me looking at her longingly.
She always seems to know my mind,
And promises someday to be mine!

robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…

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Re: SOMEDAY! (User Rating: 1 )
by humphdj on Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 12:31:40 AM AEST
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Sounds like you've got it bad.....or maybe not so bad. Anyway I liked this a lot, simply good.

Rgds
Dave

Re: SOMEDAY! (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherry_Gail_Heim on Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 11:39:59 AM AEST
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Very good write, Robert..thanks for the read.
Take care,
Sherry

Re: SOMEDAY! (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:17:51 AM AEST
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flipperty gibbet....this is wonderful stuff!
life is great when you are in love.

Re: SOMEDAY! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 10:51:31 AM AEST
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I like this. So true to hear it from a male writer's view. How your feelings reveal so much about you. Nice write.
Amber Rose :)

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