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Array ( [sid] => 81374 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cj Ranson:I [time] => 2005-01-25 03:41:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When I first wrote down words
That began to rhyme
I thought it was neat
Good way to spend my time

Lately I've begun to tire
And maybe I feel Im the big fat liar
When i write down all this crap
People believe it
And I'm sorry to say
That I now feel
This whole place
Is in on this deal

Expressing emotion is fine
But in this fashion I now feel
That no-ones right
No-one is real

And now I know
That I'm not like this

I'm the one who seeks the face I had
Before I was born

For then no fault can pass me

And now I know
I'm the one
Who doesn't believe in this crap
This lie and this superficial pity

Who knows pain?
No-one

Not I nor you

Tell me you feel
And you will lie

Tell me you don't
And your being honest

Say what you want
Spit at my words
Revenge is sweet
And now is all that matters.

"seek perfection, and you will find sadness, seek nothing and you will find perfecion"
-Cheng Tzao [comments] => 5 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 43 [informant] => cj_ranson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Cj Ranson:I

Contributed by cj_ranson on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 03:41:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

When I first wrote down words
That began to rhyme
I thought it was neat
Good way to spend my time

Lately I've begun to tire
And maybe I feel Im the big fat liar
When i write down all this crap
People believe it
And I'm sorry to say
That I now feel
This whole place
Is in on this deal

Expressing emotion is fine
But in this fashion I now feel
That no-ones right
No-one is real

And now I know
That I'm not like this

I'm the one who seeks the face I had
Before I was born

For then no fault can pass me

And now I know
I'm the one
Who doesn't believe in this crap
This lie and this superficial pity

Who knows pain?
No-one

Not I nor you

Tell me you feel
And you will lie

Tell me you don't
And your being honest

Say what you want
Spit at my words
Revenge is sweet
And now is all that matters.

"seek perfection, and you will find sadness, seek nothing and you will find perfecion"
-Cheng Tzao

Copyright © cj_ranson ... [ 2005-01-25 03:41:50]
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Re: Cj Ranson:I (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:19:33 AM AEST
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Nice quote at the end. I knew a CJ once in Abq... he was a good troop.

Re: Cj Ranson:I (User Rating: 1 )
by One on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 07:50:59 AM AEST
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revenge is sweet..
yes
:)
but the sweetness wears off easily

ONE

Re: Cj Ranson:I (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:31:10 AM AEST
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id spit on your words but it would mess up my screen.
lol nah u got a good point here sean, but wats true to
you may not be true to others might wanna remember
that. but yes very well done, i especially like the quote
at the end, ahhh the emmortal words of cheng tzao.

diz

Re: Cj Ranson:I (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:58:51 AM AEST
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nicely written sean, i could take a guess at who inspired this...

Re: Cj Ranson:I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:42:45 AM AEST
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excellent work.

J

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