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Array ( [sid] => 81320 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart of Ice [time] => 2005-01-24 20:14:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Heart of Ice

This heart of ice
Can't be melted
This pain from it
Leaves me broken

I've tried to feel emotion
But I don't like the solution
Because pain isn't worth it
When I leave myself open

It's hard to change
And rearrange
Who I've been
When

I've been left broken
And hurt when open
Is pain really worth it?
When a heart of ice
Can't be melted
But can still be broken? [comments] => 8 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Heart of Ice

Contributed by essentially9 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Heart of Ice

This heart of ice
Can't be melted
This pain from it
Leaves me broken

I've tried to feel emotion
But I don't like the solution
Because pain isn't worth it
When I leave myself open

It's hard to change
And rearrange
Who I've been
When

I've been left broken
And hurt when open
Is pain really worth it?
When a heart of ice
Can't be melted
But can still be broken?

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-24 20:14:37]
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Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:23:51 PM AEST
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Your amazing hun..I would throw you on an alter and sacrifice you to the poet god's..

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by ElatedNBliss on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:37:27 PM AEST
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Hey it's nice to know someone feels the same way. I dunno being heartless and cold really doesn't bother me...but that's jus my opinion.!
nice write!

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:54:05 PM AEST
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Wonderful write! I can't really say that I relate to much to it, being distant is something i'm not very good at, even when I try. But I still like this alot anyways! -Sami-

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by fastestofthefast on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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i think i understand. great work.
-eric

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:47:54 PM AEST
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brilliant,you are simply one of the best here.

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:01:14 PM AEST
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Yet another amazing write

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:38:55 AM AEST
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A very gripping emotional write.
Very nicely writen and composed.
Great Write.

Jane x

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:30:26 PM AEST
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So much gorgeous emotion in this piece. I love it.

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