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You never heard the things I said
Chase the pain, I wish I were dead
You might as well drill a hole through my head

Falling low and I’m stuck down here
Everything looks different from here
I wish our future was more clear
I wish I could just run out of tears

Catching rays of the nighttime sun
Everything that I knew is done
Heroes fight, all I do is run
When will I ever learn my lesson?

Crucify me, just don’t lead me on
How can it be that I’m always wrong?
The knots are tied, the picture’s drawn
I hold my breath waiting for the dawn

Solidified whispers fight my anguish
All these thoughts I’d kill to vanquish
We’re both at fault, we both wished this
An empty soul gives a bloody kiss [comments] => 5 [counter] => 301 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ataraxia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Bloody Kiss

Contributed by Ataraxia on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I try to smile but I choke instead
You never heard the things I said
Chase the pain, I wish I were dead
You might as well drill a hole through my head

Falling low and I’m stuck down here
Everything looks different from here
I wish our future was more clear
I wish I could just run out of tears

Catching rays of the nighttime sun
Everything that I knew is done
Heroes fight, all I do is run
When will I ever learn my lesson?

Crucify me, just don’t lead me on
How can it be that I’m always wrong?
The knots are tied, the picture’s drawn
I hold my breath waiting for the dawn

Solidified whispers fight my anguish
All these thoughts I’d kill to vanquish
We’re both at fault, we both wished this
An empty soul gives a bloody kiss

Copyright Â© Ataraxia ... [ 2005-01-24 19:53:47]
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Re: A Bloody Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:22:22 PM AEST
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I really, really liked this poem. I will read more of your poetry because you are really good! I will very much encourage you to keep writing such wonderful poetry, but next time maybe we can keep it happy!:)

stew

Re: A Bloody Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:43:30 PM AEST
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kEEP it happy..Why..I thought this was perfect the way it was..Your images worked very well..The flow was top notch..

Re: A Bloody Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:55:54 PM AEST
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I like this alot, the darkness, the flow, the rhyming. This is a great poem and I like it. *nods*

Re: A Bloody Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:41:26 PM AEST
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smile empty soul. =] good post. potential yet to be had.

Re: A Bloody Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by depressedsoul on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:41:33 AM AEST
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i really really really like this poem! keep it up.

Good luck
depressedsoul

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