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Array ( [sid] => 81290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling [time] => 2005-01-24 16:43:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Falling

Somebody please catch me! I’m falling deeper and deeper , I’m so far down I can’t see the light. Does anyone

know I’m falling? Do they notice me? I’ve fallen to deep to tell, my mind is spinning, and it needs to stop! I

try to scream for help, but my voice is cracked, I try to climb, but my body’s seems detached. I try with all I

have , but my heart is too weak. I didn’t even try with all that I could, why? My whole self is lost; it’s been

crumpled, burned, and drained far too long. I’m dead. Who cares if this time I smoke a little too much, go a

little too far, I won’t worry if tomorrow I don’t wake up, I believe my body is ready to give up, when your

world is full of endless pain and emptiness there is nothing to see when you open your eyes. Because when

I open them I have no time to look around, my eyes are wet and blurred and the blanket of smoke seems

to never clear; ‘I’m falling on and on; deeper and deeper. My last words to the world would be: I’m sorry,

I’m scared, I should have …..
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 66 [informant] => QueenEEliz33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Falling

Contributed by QueenEEliz33 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Falling

Somebody please catch me! I’m falling deeper and deeper , I’m so far down I can’t see the light. Does anyone

know I’m falling? Do they notice me? I’ve fallen to deep to tell, my mind is spinning, and it needs to stop! I

try to scream for help, but my voice is cracked, I try to climb, but my body’s seems detached. I try with all I

have , but my heart is too weak. I didn’t even try with all that I could, why? My whole self is lost; it’s been

crumpled, burned, and drained far too long. I’m dead. Who cares if this time I smoke a little too much, go a

little too far, I won’t worry if tomorrow I don’t wake up, I believe my body is ready to give up, when your

world is full of endless pain and emptiness there is nothing to see when you open your eyes. Because when

I open them I have no time to look around, my eyes are wet and blurred and the blanket of smoke seems

to never clear; ‘I’m falling on and on; deeper and deeper. My last words to the world would be: I’m sorry,

I’m scared, I should have …..

Copyright Â© QueenEEliz33 ... [ 2005-01-24 16:43:14]
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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:24:44 PM AEST
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I have noticed you write alot about drug addiction, but so do I... I can totally relate to many or your peices. This I liked because it reminded me of a freestyle write. I hope you can get yourself together sweetie.

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:42:15 PM AEST
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I can completely comprehend your feelings and emotions. I've been through drug addiction and I know the ups and downs.... you expressed your self beautifully. Just know that you are not alone.
ALINA

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