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My head is a ball of intertwining, out of control thoughts, questions, and emotions;
it leads me to never ending confusion that spins and twirls in my ignorant soul.
It is so obvious, why doesn’t anyone see it?
Do I create such a mask; it’s hidden from the outside?
But through the twisting and turning there is visions that still stand clear.
Love and hope. Most unstable,
but the love of my friends will stay solid.
Sometimes I wonder if they weren’t here if I could hold on,
And the thought brings chills frozen though out my existence.
I know if I hold on I will stay strong.
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Strength inside the Raving…

Contributed by QueenEEliz33 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Strength inside the Raving….

My head is a ball of intertwining, out of control thoughts, questions, and emotions;
it leads me to never ending confusion that spins and twirls in my ignorant soul.
It is so obvious, why doesn’t anyone see it?
Do I create such a mask; it’s hidden from the outside?
But through the twisting and turning there is visions that still stand clear.
Love and hope. Most unstable,
but the love of my friends will stay solid.
Sometimes I wonder if they weren’t here if I could hold on,
And the thought brings chills frozen though out my existence.
I know if I hold on I will stay strong.

Copyright Â© QueenEEliz33 ... [ 2005-01-24 16:35:05]
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Re: Strength inside the Raving… (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:01:37 PM AEST
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The title ensnared me. I think of self-struggle as including hope, since it implies the battle is not yet done. You do well finding strength through friendship. I stand alone mostly, and find mine in a sense of humor (or irony - she says wryly). Good write! Cheers!

Re: Strength inside the Raving… (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:00:21 PM AEST
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Great write. I enjoyed reading it.

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