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Array ( [sid] => 81285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happiness [time] => 2005-01-24 16:21:48 [hometext] => I wrote this with someone I loved in mind. She brightened my world, was there for me through tough times, and she was really, truly beautiful. No matter who you care about, if they truly mean anything to u, they simply make u happier. Critiques invited. [bodytext] => I haven’t seen in as many days
As I’ve counted all the ways
Your light’s shone through my guise.
I’ve realized so much can make me smile
If you’re around for a little while
Seeing beyond my lies.

You weren’t around but here you are,
Not by my side, but not feeling far,
Loneliness disappears.
You raise me to so many highs,
When you’re around all my sadness dies,
Happiness reappears.

I haven’t seen you in as many days
As I’ve counted all the ways
You’ve changed every part of me.
I’m a better man with no loneliness
I never want more than this.
Nothing should make me this happy.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 2 [informant] => fielding88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Happiness

Contributed by fielding88 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I haven’t seen in as many days
As I’ve counted all the ways
Your light’s shone through my guise.
I’ve realized so much can make me smile
If you’re around for a little while
Seeing beyond my lies.

You weren’t around but here you are,
Not by my side, but not feeling far,
Loneliness disappears.
You raise me to so many highs,
When you’re around all my sadness dies,
Happiness reappears.

I haven’t seen you in as many days
As I’ve counted all the ways
You’ve changed every part of me.
I’m a better man with no loneliness
I never want more than this.
Nothing should make me this happy.




Copyright © fielding88 ... [ 2005-01-24 16:21:48]
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Re: Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:29:18 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. I hope you see this person again.

Spazzo


Re: Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 06:20:27 PM AEST
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A very well-written poem for a very lucky lady!


Re: Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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what an ironic poem after our conversations, lol. nothing is making you happy, something is. lol, i must admit everytime i saw happiness i thought of jarred, lol. i liked the first stanza, before it became too happy. ::goes of to read sad poetry:: cant be too happy...


Re: Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:09:04 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this Marc. I never write 'lovey dovey' poetry because it always comes off as sounding very cheesy to me but with your use of words and the way you make so much feeling and meaning spit out at me just by veiwing the poem made this far from cheesy. It was a beautiful poem and the way you just got so excited/happy at them end put a smile on my face.

Truly beautiful write,
--amanda--


Re: Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:36:40 PM AEST
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awww happiness! Isn't that what everyone in this world is searching for? I know I am but I'm glad that you found something that makes you happy. . .even if it was only for awhile. Amazing write Marc and every word is filled with true and deep emotion. . .I love it!

~Brenna~




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