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Array ( [sid] => 81224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Twisted Symphony [time] => 2005-01-24 07:44:54 [hometext] => I dwell in darkness, once I loved now I am a faded version of my former self....Alone cold and lost just the way I always feel. [bodytext] => Twisted Symphony

Tears of anguish drip from a sodden chin,
Agony ripples through a weary frame,
Great red droplets well from recent gashes,
I want to rip away the layers of deceit,
Tear away the caked up guilt,

My hand grips a cold hard blade,
In a death like unyielding grasp,
I am tense all over wishing for an end,
Willing my self to make the final slash,
To dig in and pry out the twisted hate,
You have turned me into something dead,
Stolen my true feelings and left me empty,

Your eyes bore deep into my soul,
Drinking in all that I had to offer,
Raping me dry leaving a shell,
Then you turned and walked away,
All you left me was your fading back,
So now I use this blade to twist out life,
To carve away existence forever,

The floor is slick with tears of blood,
Flesh hangs bone glistens sinew bulges,
I do not care anymore you have taken that from me,
Your heartlessness has violated my inner being,
And left me foul and retched,
A rasping sound echoes as the blade saws,
I scream but find nothing in my actions,
Nothing worth holding on to,
No will left anymore,

I rip my eyes out of their sockets,
Gouts of gore spurt from empty hollows,
Yet your sickening beauty lingers in my heart,
How I wish I could erase you from within,

My back slides down the wall leaving a bloody smudge,
As my head bounces twice upon a cold hard surface,
I have run out of time I could not purge you completely,
My body is almost empty yet I am still haunted,
Must I die to be free of your unearthly lies?
As the last of my fluids empty out onto the floor,
I asked for redemption but I was denied,
Love played me like a fiddle,
And death was her ballad.

By Sapphire_Blue

My blood flows in Mysteries tide.
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Twisted Symphony

Contributed by Sapphire_Blue on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:44:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Twisted Symphony

Tears of anguish drip from a sodden chin,
Agony ripples through a weary frame,
Great red droplets well from recent gashes,
I want to rip away the layers of deceit,
Tear away the caked up guilt,

My hand grips a cold hard blade,
In a death like unyielding grasp,
I am tense all over wishing for an end,
Willing my self to make the final slash,
To dig in and pry out the twisted hate,
You have turned me into something dead,
Stolen my true feelings and left me empty,

Your eyes bore deep into my soul,
Drinking in all that I had to offer,
Raping me dry leaving a shell,
Then you turned and walked away,
All you left me was your fading back,
So now I use this blade to twist out life,
To carve away existence forever,

The floor is slick with tears of blood,
Flesh hangs bone glistens sinew bulges,
I do not care anymore you have taken that from me,
Your heartlessness has violated my inner being,
And left me foul and retched,
A rasping sound echoes as the blade saws,
I scream but find nothing in my actions,
Nothing worth holding on to,
No will left anymore,

I rip my eyes out of their sockets,
Gouts of gore spurt from empty hollows,
Yet your sickening beauty lingers in my heart,
How I wish I could erase you from within,

My back slides down the wall leaving a bloody smudge,
As my head bounces twice upon a cold hard surface,
I have run out of time I could not purge you completely,
My body is almost empty yet I am still haunted,
Must I die to be free of your unearthly lies?
As the last of my fluids empty out onto the floor,
I asked for redemption but I was denied,
Love played me like a fiddle,
And death was her ballad.

By Sapphire_Blue

My blood flows in Mysteries tide.




Copyright © Sapphire_Blue ... [ 2005-01-24 07:44:54]
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Re: Twisted Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:55:56 AM AEST
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an in teresting write, it touchs me close to home on almost every level, nice choice of words too! Keep at it, I'll see you on the dark side.


Re: Twisted Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:02:52 AM AEST
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this is sooo intense, your darkness flowed beautifully.Great write.


Re: Twisted Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:09:19 AM AEST
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the depth of description to bring out the emotion is so beautifully intense,it kept me captivated throughout the whole piece.

~keep the faith~
BB


Re: Twisted Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:56:29 AM AEST
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Ohh the poem is just dripping with darkness all around.
I'm not sure if this is the same poem you sent me, i really love this dark write.
As always your the master of dark.

Jane x


Re: Twisted Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:39:06 PM AEST
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haunting.... hugs n' love nessa

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