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Array ( [sid] => 81209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Change is Coming [time] => 2005-01-24 02:05:19 [hometext] => a few more months of life as I know it, a change is coming......please comment, thanks :) [bodytext] => I can't wait to get a fresh start,
a chance to wipe my slate clean.
Anything to numb this pain in my heart,
help get my mind of Christine.
A little more then two months and I'm outta here,
goin' to school on the west coast.
To everyone here I'll just disappear,
vanish like a ghost.
From cornfields to dense population,
what does my future hold?
I see lots of public transportation,
and never again being cold.
California doesn't seem half bad,
I could definitely live there.
I know leaving is gonna be sad,
but Minnesota just can't compare.
I can sit on the beach and watch the sunset,
that's something I've always wanted to do.
That's something you never forget,
a moment too good to be true.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 21 [informant] => CurtisC [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A Change is Coming

Contributed by CurtisC on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:05:19 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I can't wait to get a fresh start,
a chance to wipe my slate clean.
Anything to numb this pain in my heart,
help get my mind of Christine.
A little more then two months and I'm outta here,
goin' to school on the west coast.
To everyone here I'll just disappear,
vanish like a ghost.
From cornfields to dense population,
what does my future hold?
I see lots of public transportation,
and never again being cold.
California doesn't seem half bad,
I could definitely live there.
I know leaving is gonna be sad,
but Minnesota just can't compare.
I can sit on the beach and watch the sunset,
that's something I've always wanted to do.
That's something you never forget,
a moment too good to be true.

Copyright © CurtisC ... [ 2005-01-24 02:05:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Change is Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by cottoncandy on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:25:08 PM AEST
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I loved your poem...it made me think about moving to Minnesota...cuz i also live in California...I'm sorry about Christine...i hope you enjoy Minnesota. Watching the sunset sounds extremely nice...

Re: A Change is Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:00:19 PM AEST
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a break and fresh start does wonders believe me iv done it. Dont give up on her though you never know what will happen . Another great write from you I love your honesty and emotion
Michelle

Re: A Change is Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:20:53 PM AEST
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Well Curtis, what else can i say...I really do enjoy all the poems uv written. I hope u can come to terms with u and Christine. =) Keep ur poems coming!!
**hugs** TD

Re: A Change is Coming (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:09:08 AM AEST
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good luck to you in your move and new exciting life ahead! wonderful hopeful poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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