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Array ( [sid] => 81187 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Wish [time] => 2005-01-23 22:10:39 [hometext] => This poem discribes how i feel about a certain someone [bodytext] => It is the middle of the night
Here I stand with delight
Holding a knife above your bed
Knowing what you said
Knowing that you would not get a chance to scream
Also knowing this is not a dream
You hurt me bad
You thought I was just a fad
That I was something you could throw away
Guess what, not today buddy. Not today
I will not be treated this way
You have no say
In my life
As I slowly lower my knife,
You look up at me
Can’t you see?
After what you said
You deserve to be dead
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Death Wish

Contributed by Sassy on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



It is the middle of the night
Here I stand with delight
Holding a knife above your bed
Knowing what you said
Knowing that you would not get a chance to scream
Also knowing this is not a dream
You hurt me bad
You thought I was just a fad
That I was something you could throw away
Guess what, not today buddy. Not today
I will not be treated this way
You have no say
In my life
As I slowly lower my knife,
You look up at me
Can’t you see?
After what you said
You deserve to be dead




Copyright © Sassy ... [ 2005-01-23 22:10:39]
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Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:13:49 PM AEST
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haha, if i offed everyone that i thought deserved to die, only about 5 people would be alive, and even they wouldnt be alive for long. keep posting. =]


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:04:07 AM AEST
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Excellent write intense and dark, cool poem.


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:46:07 AM AEST
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beautifully dark


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by ArmyBrat on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:58:03 PM AEST
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You sound like you're talking about your ex trust me that's the way i feel when my boyfriend broke up with me.


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by ArmyBrat on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:58:05 PM AEST
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You sound like you're talking about your ex trust me that's the way i feel when my boyfriend broke up with me.




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