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Array ( [sid] => 81169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead and Gone [time] => 2005-01-23 19:30:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I lend my hand out
Knowing I can't help
Being something I can't
This is how I've always felt

I have always wanted out
Knowing you could'nt help
Loving some one you can't
After all I have always felt

Alone

Now I try to push my feeling aside
Knowing this is what you want
I would have sacrificed
Without giving it another thought

You always push me aside
Without knowing what I want
I'm just another sacrifice
For your ever loving thought

Alone

Trying to be what I'm not
Having nothing I want
Being everything I can't
Never having a thought

Alone

Now I give up
I have to give in
Never anyone around
To help me live...
When I was down

At least no one will miss me
When I'm gone
Becouse
No one was around
When I was alive and alone
So no tears to be shed
When I'm Dead and Gone

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dead and Gone

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I lend my hand out
Knowing I can't help
Being something I can't
This is how I've always felt

I have always wanted out
Knowing you could'nt help
Loving some one you can't
After all I have always felt

Alone

Now I try to push my feeling aside
Knowing this is what you want
I would have sacrificed
Without giving it another thought

You always push me aside
Without knowing what I want
I'm just another sacrifice
For your ever loving thought

Alone

Trying to be what I'm not
Having nothing I want
Being everything I can't
Never having a thought

Alone

Now I give up
I have to give in
Never anyone around
To help me live...
When I was down

At least no one will miss me
When I'm gone
Becouse
No one was around
When I was alive and alone
So no tears to be shed
When I'm Dead and Gone

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-01-23 19:30:20]
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Re: Dead and Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:39:51 PM AEST
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awe .. good poem .. good emotions .. but i hope you are not feeling like this because then that would be very sad .. keep wrting !

Re: Dead and Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:37:44 PM AEST
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this would make a fantastic song. well i would miss you, and i could always write poetic tears.

Re: Dead and Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 12:50:01 PM AEST
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The ready availability of suicide, like sex and alcohol, is one of life's basic consolations.

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