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let me say what's on my mind

why did you leave me
why didn't you set me free

you took away my heart
and broke it to million parts

you made me cry
and took away my will to try

you cheat on me
and lie to me

you could have said we aren;t meant to be
and you would have never hurted me

but now i am here with tears
and now is you and men that i fear
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heartbroke

Contributed by bebe20071 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:27:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Please this time
let me say what's on my mind

why did you leave me
why didn't you set me free

you took away my heart
and broke it to million parts

you made me cry
and took away my will to try

you cheat on me
and lie to me

you could have said we aren;t meant to be
and you would have never hurted me

but now i am here with tears
and now is you and men that i fear

Copyright © bebe20071 ... [ 2005-01-23 16:27:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: heartbroke (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_descent on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:32:03 PM AEST
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men eh? cant live with 'em, cant live without 'em. this is a poem that a lotta people can relate to. good write!

Re: heartbroke (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:36:30 PM AEST
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you'll get over it you can be happy with out him and you will find some one who doesnt cheat on you and lie to you love will find you...great write!

Re: heartbroke (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:37:08 PM AEST
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you could have said we aren;t meant to be
and you would have never hurt me

but now i am here with tears
and now it is you and men I fear

(if they can send one man to the moon...
why can't they send ...all men to the moon???
LOL) good write..

Re: heartbroke (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:05:19 PM AEST
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And all Women are victims..Yeah..Your post is good for what the subject is..I do disagree with most of the fellow comment makers here..But then again..My glass if here is always half empty..

Re: heartbroke (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:11:02 PM AEST
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It will be hard t trust again i know but one day you will find your prince

great write

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