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Array ( [sid] => 81133 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Decide [time] => 2005-01-23 14:29:55 [hometext] => This is a fast-paced kinda poem, its got a beat n everything. I wrote this for everybody who has a partner who doesn't really kno them the way you want them to. You're together, but you're far apart too. Critique please. [bodytext] => Its been so long since I saw the glow
In the eyes of that young lady.
How many times must I count the ways
You’ve moved me baby?

I’m sick and tired of you on my mind.
I want my space
I want you out of mine.
You’ve got me thinking of life without you
But I know I’m living in a world for two.

So crazy, I don’t want to know
How you’ve hypnotized me so.
This world is just too much for me
But I know with you is where I’ve got to be.

Take a step back
Give me some room.
Do not come back
Its much too soon.
I have to know
Where you want to be.
Just tell me now
Is it with me?

I’m sick and tired of thinking of you
In the arms of another man.
Was I a game? Was it just a ruse
The way you held onto my hand?

I’m just so tired of living this way
I want this world to end
I’m counting down the days.
I know it’s easy to say that you love
When you’re blinded by the twilight of the stars above.

You’re out there I can feel you near.
You keep your distance but you don’t fear.
Someone inside I want to know.
Let your guard down let her show.

I took my time
I took a while.
I gave an inch
You stole a mile.
I’m in the dark
You’re in the room.
You’ve left your mark
You’ve sealed my doom.
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Decide

Contributed by fielding88 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:29:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Its been so long since I saw the glow
In the eyes of that young lady.
How many times must I count the ways
You’ve moved me baby?

I’m sick and tired of you on my mind.
I want my space
I want you out of mine.
You’ve got me thinking of life without you
But I know I’m living in a world for two.

So crazy, I don’t want to know
How you’ve hypnotized me so.
This world is just too much for me
But I know with you is where I’ve got to be.

Take a step back
Give me some room.
Do not come back
Its much too soon.
I have to know
Where you want to be.
Just tell me now
Is it with me?

I’m sick and tired of thinking of you
In the arms of another man.
Was I a game? Was it just a ruse
The way you held onto my hand?

I’m just so tired of living this way
I want this world to end
I’m counting down the days.
I know it’s easy to say that you love
When you’re blinded by the twilight of the stars above.

You’re out there I can feel you near.
You keep your distance but you don’t fear.
Someone inside I want to know.
Let your guard down let her show.

I took my time
I took a while.
I gave an inch
You stole a mile.
I’m in the dark
You’re in the room.
You’ve left your mark
You’ve sealed my doom.

Copyright Â© fielding88 ... [ 2005-01-23 14:29:55]
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Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_descent on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:44:40 PM AEST
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really impressive writing. well structured and thought out. I can really relate to it to. I love that last stanza, its a very powerful way to end the poem

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:20:16 PM AEST
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great poem . somethins lots of people can relate to.

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:21:07 PM AEST
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great poem . something lots of people can relate to.

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:47:14 PM AEST
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i was reading your autors note thinger and im going through the exact same thing also and i loved your poem great write!

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:31:11 PM AEST
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Again - massively impressed.......I have commented on two of your poems in one sitting - this may be a record......I really like your style and you have lots to say so write on!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing!
juliette

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:11:59 PM AEST
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awesom write,kinda similar to how i felt about ppl before,thats y i kinda quit getten close to ppl,good write keep it up,loven it

R*J

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:12:05 PM AEST
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you know what marc, you need to quit writing about me and not telling me ::hmph:: i cant believe you wrote this about me, im not that horrible. god. how could you do this to me. its ridiculus. just kidding.... great poem marc, i loved the ending stanza because it was so perfect for this piece. the only thing that bothered me in this piece was the use of baby, i hate that word, lol. write some more poems, ::bulldozes through block::

Re: Decide (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:36:56 PM AEST
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This wasn't exactly my "favorite" piece but I liked it much better after the third stanza. Both the fourth and last stanzas were phenominal the feeling you put in to them was shot right back out, I enjoyed every line within them. Besides those two the second to last stanza just knocked me off my feet, it's incrediable and left me speechless. With those three phenominal stanzas it makes this piece one of my favorites, even though I said it wasn't. lol.

All in all, this was a fantastic write. Again, one to be very proud of. You just blow me away everytime I read another poem. Your concepts are very unique and extremely thought out with so much emotion and feeling put in to them.. keep writing.

--amanda--

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