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It flows so perfect from my heart, to my hand
I sit there in thought of an angel so true
I sit there all day thinking only of you
The gentle waves start to wash up the name
But I write it again exactly the same
As the sun starts to set in the distance afar
I set there and think of my one shooting star
And into the heavens I search every night
Just for that one star to take its flight
If it takes all night I will search all above
For then I can name it the name I do love
As the moon reflects its image off of the sea
I see your sweet image dancing closer to me
And just when you reach the edge of the shore
I reach my hand out and you are there no more
And as I look down thinking Im wasting my time
I see something new in the sand next to mine
Your name looks so different it can't be true
It now says my beloved I love only you

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Writing in the Sand

Contributed by Kano on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:28:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

On the beach I write your name in the sand
It flows so perfect from my heart, to my hand
I sit there in thought of an angel so true
I sit there all day thinking only of you
The gentle waves start to wash up the name
But I write it again exactly the same
As the sun starts to set in the distance afar
I set there and think of my one shooting star
And into the heavens I search every night
Just for that one star to take its flight
If it takes all night I will search all above
For then I can name it the name I do love
As the moon reflects its image off of the sea
I see your sweet image dancing closer to me
And just when you reach the edge of the shore
I reach my hand out and you are there no more
And as I look down thinking Im wasting my time
I see something new in the sand next to mine
Your name looks so different it can't be true
It now says my beloved I love only you

Copyright © Kano ... [ 2005-01-23 01:28:36]
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Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:32:49 AM AEST
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that was great! It created such a wonderful image in my head, it was beautiful :)

Curtis

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:08:15 AM AEST
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WOW...BEAUTIFUL!

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:52:49 AM AEST
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Very romantic poem,well done.
sojourner,

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:10:48 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful and oh what images u put in my head! Can't wait to read more from you! TD

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:20:45 AM AEST
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Wow this was brilliantly written, such imagery you created with this.
I enjoyed this fab write.
I just love it.

Jane x

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:36:30 AM AEST
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very good indeed

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:15:23 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful. Great imagery.
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by supergirlblibs on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:29:53 PM AEST
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This is really lovely, can only imagine how special it is to fall in love :) xx

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:32:35 AM AEST
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The images you provide here lured me into the poem and gave me a feeling which is comforting and I like that very much.
Quite lovely , Thanks , doug

Re: Writing in the Sand (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:44:32 PM AEST
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WOW........she meant so much to you. That is the kind of stuff, any one shouldhave to them, especially if they are loved that much. Sorry,!:( great and beautiful write, tho.! You have a talent,

Brew~

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