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Array ( [sid] => 81080 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dying Dreams [time] => 2005-01-23 01:00:06 [hometext] => Sorry my poems are all about the same topic, but that's all I can think about right now :( If you want take a look at this one and let me know what you think, thanks [bodytext] => I've accepted the fact that my dream isn't coming true,
and I've never felt so much pain.
I know now that I'll never get to be with you,
but I still love you more then words can explain.

I always dream about you and I,
and how perfect life could be.
Still I wonder why?
Why I hold on to this love you'll never see.

I can't seem to get rid of it though,
you're still always on my mind.
When will it end, I don't know,
but you won't be left behind.

I'll always love you deep down inside,
this love could never fade.
The day you left a part of me died,
but I'll never forget this mark you've made. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CurtisC [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Dying Dreams

Contributed by CurtisC on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:00:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I've accepted the fact that my dream isn't coming true,
and I've never felt so much pain.
I know now that I'll never get to be with you,
but I still love you more then words can explain.

I always dream about you and I,
and how perfect life could be.
Still I wonder why?
Why I hold on to this love you'll never see.

I can't seem to get rid of it though,
you're still always on my mind.
When will it end, I don't know,
but you won't be left behind.

I'll always love you deep down inside,
this love could never fade.
The day you left a part of me died,
but I'll never forget this mark you've made.

Copyright © CurtisC ... [ 2005-01-23 01:00:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:04:43 AM AEST
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I like the rythim, I also have a problem geting off one topic when I write, I also relate to this and I like it.

Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:10:43 AM AEST
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Great write, as always...you'll put through it though. :-)

Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:11:23 AM AEST
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oops sorry, i wanted to say you'll PULL through it. :-)

Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:05:17 AM AEST
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hold on to your dreams it might become a reality someday.

Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:13:26 AM AEST
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Once again Curtis great poem, so heartfelt! TD

Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:24:51 AM AEST
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Aww this is so saw, i can certainly relate to what your saying.
This is one heck of a poem.
Thanks for shring this i loved it.

Jane x

Re: Dying Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by random88 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:14:17 AM AEST
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I really felt that poem and thought you did an awsome job of expressing yourself, plus i can relate to it.

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