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But with this violence you've shown, into my eyes you have stared,
You seem to think because you know me, that Im in your control,
You think that you can touch me, and my privacy you have stole,
If you wanted to know something, you could have just asked,
Instead of invading my private world, this just happened all so fast,
And now I fear you more than ever, I once seeked your comfort,
You tell me that you'll see me in death, I can't help but feel so hurt,
Im scared and now I don't want to be alone, I want to dissapear,
Why do you feel the need to cause it, this deception and this fear,
Im sorry if I ever hurt you, or made you dislike me in any way,
I just tried to be your friend, but I guess I was led astray,
So I guess that you hate me, and Im sorry if you do,
But I can't help but feel so scared, and it's all because of you....
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All Because of You

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

I though you were my friend, and I really though that you cared,
But with this violence you've shown, into my eyes you have stared,
You seem to think because you know me, that Im in your control,
You think that you can touch me, and my privacy you have stole,
If you wanted to know something, you could have just asked,
Instead of invading my private world, this just happened all so fast,
And now I fear you more than ever, I once seeked your comfort,
You tell me that you'll see me in death, I can't help but feel so hurt,
Im scared and now I don't want to be alone, I want to dissapear,
Why do you feel the need to cause it, this deception and this fear,
Im sorry if I ever hurt you, or made you dislike me in any way,
I just tried to be your friend, but I guess I was led astray,
So I guess that you hate me, and Im sorry if you do,
But I can't help but feel so scared, and it's all because of you....

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2005-01-22 21:38:34]
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Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:41:40 PM AEST
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If I ever get my hands on this creep....I'm sorry you were treated so badly.....

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:49:32 PM AEST
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these words and feeling haunted me I know exactly where your coming from. Dont apologize to him just move on without him he doesnt deserve you. Im very sorry for this pain I know it well...... I wish for you better days as you deserve
Hugs
Michelle

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:04:15 PM AEST
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*nods*...no doubt missus

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:33:17 PM AEST
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good write

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:44:22 PM AEST
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Good write. Nice flow.

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:08:30 PM AEST
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Hey great write and flow but you don't need to take any of his $hit!! Like the others have said, Move on, u don't deserve him! Good luck! TD

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelluv2write on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:24:28 AM AEST
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I agree, don't apologize to someone whos caused you pain simply because they want to see you hurt and suffer. If he was really meant to be your friend, he should have shown it differently. Keep your head up, and stay strong. *hugs* Angel

Re: All Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by eden on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:49:06 PM AEST
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These pple give good advice lol. Yes! Forget HIM! He's not worth it! What u need jenni is a nice catholic boy.....lol jk
-eden

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