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He was scared to ever love someone again.
She was ugly, worn out and plain.
A little too fat for the beauty magazines.
He was ugly, and he was emotionally bruised.
Too tall and thin to ever fit in.
She was always drunk.
And he was too high.
And he could never recognize a face that he'd seen.
Life was dark and cold and bitter
Until the day that they met each other.
It was an autumn night.
And they were both cold and full of fright.
She was on her way to die.
Finally the night of her long awaited suicide.
He was going for one final thrill.
A large dose of drugs and he knew he wouldn't be able to feel.
The two crossed each other's paths.
Almost going their separate ways
Until he asked , "Excuse me for asking, but why are you going this way?"
"I'm so sick of feeling these things that I feel, people are fake and love isn't real. I can't take this world anymore and I think I need to leave. But what brings you out here so late?"
"I guess I was sent to save you from a wrongful fate. You're the most beautiful thing I have ever seen so please, take my hand and stay here with me."

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A Suicide Fairy Tale

Contributed by Katie2008 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:25:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She was terrified of letting anyone in.
He was scared to ever love someone again.
She was ugly, worn out and plain.
A little too fat for the beauty magazines.
He was ugly, and he was emotionally bruised.
Too tall and thin to ever fit in.
She was always drunk.
And he was too high.
And he could never recognize a face that he'd seen.
Life was dark and cold and bitter
Until the day that they met each other.
It was an autumn night.
And they were both cold and full of fright.
She was on her way to die.
Finally the night of her long awaited suicide.
He was going for one final thrill.
A large dose of drugs and he knew he wouldn't be able to feel.
The two crossed each other's paths.
Almost going their separate ways
Until he asked , "Excuse me for asking, but why are you going this way?"
"I'm so sick of feeling these things that I feel, people are fake and love isn't real. I can't take this world anymore and I think I need to leave. But what brings you out here so late?"
"I guess I was sent to save you from a wrongful fate. You're the most beautiful thing I have ever seen so please, take my hand and stay here with me."





Copyright © Katie2008 ... [ 2005-01-22 21:25:13]
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Re: A Suicide Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:01:17 PM AEST
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This is truly a fairy tale of suicide ! the boy saved her from killing herself and now she can learn that love is true .. nice write !


Re: A Suicide Fairy Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:14:53 PM AEST
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True to the title, and a super ending. Great write.

Nancy




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