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Array ( [sid] => 8102 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fall Away [time] => 2002-12-06 22:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => “Fall Away” - by J. Samuelson ©2001 03/29

Tainted thoughts and fantasies
Always dreamed, realities
Painted pictures in my head
Real words from my heart, unsaid.

Muffled cries, confusion grows
Feeling what nobody knows
Reserved condition, fatal fear
Uncertain shifting, always here.

Wanting, needing, hoping for
Life to become something more
Waiting, fading, never sure
Could it ever be with her?

Dizzy and spinning in the dark
Trying to create a spark
Leave a clue, but not too much
Craving just to feel her touch.

Words unspoken, better kept
Hope the actions, show what’s left
Cannot push it, let it flow
Patience is, the way I know.

Grip the dream, and pray for more
Never let on, like before
Take it easy, Fall Away
Just another rainy day.

Pouring down, don’t give up yet
Give it time, do not forget
She is here, yet still so far
I keep on wishing on that star.

Maybe let it Fall Away
Should it maybe be this way?
Let it go, don’t get too far
It’s become, a shooting star.

Fall Away, and safe within
Stop the pain, and not begin
Avoid the void, inside my heart
Still Fall Away, let wonder part.

No more need to question fate
Give in now, it’s not too late
Save myself, for another day
Until then pray, to Fall Away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Fall Away

Contributed by Joker17 on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



“Fall Away” - by J. Samuelson ©2001 03/29

Tainted thoughts and fantasies
Always dreamed, realities
Painted pictures in my head
Real words from my heart, unsaid.

Muffled cries, confusion grows
Feeling what nobody knows
Reserved condition, fatal fear
Uncertain shifting, always here.

Wanting, needing, hoping for
Life to become something more
Waiting, fading, never sure
Could it ever be with her?

Dizzy and spinning in the dark
Trying to create a spark
Leave a clue, but not too much
Craving just to feel her touch.

Words unspoken, better kept
Hope the actions, show what’s left
Cannot push it, let it flow
Patience is, the way I know.

Grip the dream, and pray for more
Never let on, like before
Take it easy, Fall Away
Just another rainy day.

Pouring down, don’t give up yet
Give it time, do not forget
She is here, yet still so far
I keep on wishing on that star.

Maybe let it Fall Away
Should it maybe be this way?
Let it go, don’t get too far
It’s become, a shooting star.

Fall Away, and safe within
Stop the pain, and not begin
Avoid the void, inside my heart
Still Fall Away, let wonder part.

No more need to question fate
Give in now, it’s not too late
Save myself, for another day
Until then pray, to Fall Away.




Copyright © Joker17 ... [ 2002-12-06 22:00:00]
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Re: Fall Away (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:25:37 AM AEST
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Words refletive of the sadness of a wanton heart.

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Re: Fall Away (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:53:27 AM AEST
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I really like your poem. Its most like I could feel what you were going through.




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