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Array ( [sid] => 81000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming of Life in Water [time] => 2005-01-22 15:09:05 [hometext] => This is a poem I had to write for my English class(it describes changing into a dolphin) last year in grade nine. MRS.JONZ WAS AWESOME haha.. See Ya On The Flip Side:P JAS [bodytext] => Dreaming of Life In Water

i stare into the blue in the poster on the wall
it makes me think...i wish i was there
then i notice my skin is gray and it has changed
now i feel like im getting all rearranged

i feel my hands turning into fins
when i look down, i cant believe what i see
my feet are not apart, they are together in one
and then i look up, to see the sun

i feel water around me and have the urge...
to jump into the air and crash into the deep blue
i swim down deep to the bottom of the ocean floor
i see gold, diamonds, and precious jewels galore

i hear someone call out my name from a far
i snap back to reality and focus again
the lesson he is teaching is such a bore to me
i just want to go back into my dream world fantasies

By: Jasmine Trask Gr:9 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 43 [informant] => JasTrask_22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Dreaming of Life in Water

Contributed by JasTrask_22 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 03:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Dreaming of Life In Water

i stare into the blue in the poster on the wall
it makes me think...i wish i was there
then i notice my skin is gray and it has changed
now i feel like im getting all rearranged

i feel my hands turning into fins
when i look down, i cant believe what i see
my feet are not apart, they are together in one
and then i look up, to see the sun

i feel water around me and have the urge...
to jump into the air and crash into the deep blue
i swim down deep to the bottom of the ocean floor
i see gold, diamonds, and precious jewels galore

i hear someone call out my name from a far
i snap back to reality and focus again
the lesson he is teaching is such a bore to me
i just want to go back into my dream world fantasies

By: Jasmine Trask Gr:9

Copyright © JasTrask_22 ... [ 2005-01-22 15:09:05]
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Re: Dreaming of Life in Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 03:26:17 PM AEST
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This is lovely...I always dream about being a Mermaid, tho dolphins fascinate me...... Enjoyed this very much.
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni

Re: Dreaming of Life in Water (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:26:23 PM AEST
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excellent title and poem, great images, i hope you got an a+! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Dreaming of Life in Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Dreama on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:22:49 PM AEST
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I liked the write! good imagination and imagery :P keep it up!
Pete

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