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Array ( [sid] => 80984 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Basketball Beach [time] => 2005-01-22 12:04:44 [hometext] => Megan, the girl who inspired ' 'Lorelei Amaya' ' said to me as we watched some guys playing bball, ' 'You know, the way we're sitting here feels like we're at the beach' ' and I ran with the idea [bodytext] => Sitting on the sidelines--Or is it the shore?
Relaxed with a friend--Just what I've longed for
The players move round to a slow hip hop beat
Sliding like waves and they sweat from the heat
And the balls in the air make an arc coming down
Resembling fish jumping up, swimming round
When one team scores a point, makes a basket with ease
You can hear the net swoosh like a warm ocean breeze
Our hardwood beach sand just needs seashells and snails
We'll swap sneakers for sandals and make castles with pails
And just like the beach I wish this wouldn't end
Simply us sitting here being nothing but friends

Now, you see, at the beach I don't know how to swim
And I know that the dawn of our friendship is dim
One guy takes a long shot, I feel just like him
Like shooting despite the distance to the rim
See, 'cause I feel the need to go out on this limb
To hold onto this friendship that's based on a whim

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 988 [topic] => 16 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
A Basketball Beach

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:04:44 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Sitting on the sidelines--Or is it the shore?
Relaxed with a friend--Just what I've longed for
The players move round to a slow hip hop beat
Sliding like waves and they sweat from the heat
And the balls in the air make an arc coming down
Resembling fish jumping up, swimming round
When one team scores a point, makes a basket with ease
You can hear the net swoosh like a warm ocean breeze
Our hardwood beach sand just needs seashells and snails
We'll swap sneakers for sandals and make castles with pails
And just like the beach I wish this wouldn't end
Simply us sitting here being nothing but friends

Now, you see, at the beach I don't know how to swim
And I know that the dawn of our friendship is dim
One guy takes a long shot, I feel just like him
Like shooting despite the distance to the rim
See, 'cause I feel the need to go out on this limb
To hold onto this friendship that's based on a whim





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Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:17:54 PM AEST
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Interesting comparison... Good stuff.


Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Whitelightning77 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:54:23 PM AEST
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definitely different tie-in of a beach and bball.

thanks for sharing!


Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:41:44 AM AEST
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I've never heard of such a comparison before. That was really interesting, Chelsea. The next time I watch a basketball game, I'll be thinking of the beach, then thinking of you and your wonderful gift of poetry. But, I did like how you weaved friendship into the poem. Gave it a nice touch. Beautiful Chelsea. Keep writing. (and write me!!!!)
~Carrie~


Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:58:25 PM AEST
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Hey Chels! Good to read something by you
haven't been on here as much lately. Anyway I
liked this poem very good and I liked all the
comparison stuff made for a very interesting
read.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:11:14 PM AEST
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Very good write. You have excellent rhyming skills


Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by gothman666 on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:17:35 AM AEST
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nice right


Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:55:19 AM AEST
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Hey I love basketball and this poem is really good! I'm gonna' keep that and show all my old teammates from high school they gonna' love it too!"

thanks and can ya' make more outta' sports?




Re: A Basketball Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:08:43 AM AEST
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Hey I love basketball and this poem is really good! I'm gonna' keep that and show all my old teammates from high school they gonna' love it too!"

thanks and can ya' make more outta' sports?






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