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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Most Dangerous Place
[time] => 2005-01-22 02:32:39
[hometext] => My first shot at dark poetry. Work with me, I'll get better
[bodytext] => What’s going on? This isn’t the real world It’s dark and all the screams make my hair curl There’s no bombing countries and no massive fires There’s mythical creatures: werewolves and vampires I try to stand up and walk around But my feet aren’t even touching the ground Flying around like one of Dracula’s bats Oh man! Those are some real big cats This can’t be real, it’s all a big fake All of a sudden the ground starts to shake Emerging from the huge crevice in the ground A huge creature rises up and looks around I thought he had knives in his mouth, but they were just his teeth With massive clawed hands, he pulled a sword from his sheath Ten feet tall with a gold sword of five Oh my God, am I really alive Almost human looking, except for six hairy arms It was easy to tell he could do some harm I’ve got to get away from this beast Before he makes me part of a feast Floating away, I hear his loud roar I can’t take this place anymore Is this real? I’m confused and don’t know what to think All of a sudden when my eye started to blink It was on me with incredible speed It was easy to tell I was about to become monster feed It picks me up and raises me to its jaws I squirm and kick but can’t escape his claws I have just enough time to realize that my life is through Right as the monster easily bites me in two Suddenly I wake up and see that I’m fine Now I know the most dangerous place is my mind [comments] => 7 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bigtig6269 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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