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Array ( [sid] => 80941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the note i cannot write [time] => 2005-01-22 00:30:30 [hometext] => **has this ever happened to anyone... you carry a crush for many years, but because of fears you never are able to tell them*** [bodytext] => I started to write you a little note today, but some how I did not know what to say,
me who when I write, words come so freely, I was confused when i realized I didn't write nothing more than your name,
I wanted to tell you I've loved you for many years and that you could save me from my tears
but then the words wouldn't come.
I tried to write you another way tell you how I loved you still today
but then I thought of the times I've begged others to simply stay
and fear consumed me, and to you I did not write
then I thought of the many times you made me laugh
and how I wandered if we'd ever be more than just friends
In the time that has past since those High School days
I have learned that when it comes to love it all depends,
it depends on time, depends on faith, depends on space
and I wandered if you would even understand the pain I cannot erase
What would you have done on that first time you saw me again,
had we not been seperated by the glass,
would you had opened your arms and embrassed me in a hug.
or would you try to be a player or thug
act all hard and just gave me a quick wrap with just on arm
but then i thought that maybe its always been me
and when i care or love i cause harm.
so now i find the words flowing out of me
in this silly poem you may never see...
why is it that I have never been able to tell you,
that my pillow time thoughts have mostly been about you...

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 33 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
the note i cannot write

Contributed by brokenwings on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:30:30 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I started to write you a little note today, but some how I did not know what to say,
me who when I write, words come so freely, I was confused when i realized I didn't write nothing more than your name,
I wanted to tell you I've loved you for many years and that you could save me from my tears
but then the words wouldn't come.
I tried to write you another way tell you how I loved you still today
but then I thought of the times I've begged others to simply stay
and fear consumed me, and to you I did not write
then I thought of the many times you made me laugh
and how I wandered if we'd ever be more than just friends
In the time that has past since those High School days
I have learned that when it comes to love it all depends,
it depends on time, depends on faith, depends on space
and I wandered if you would even understand the pain I cannot erase
What would you have done on that first time you saw me again,
had we not been seperated by the glass,
would you had opened your arms and embrassed me in a hug.
or would you try to be a player or thug
act all hard and just gave me a quick wrap with just on arm
but then i thought that maybe its always been me
and when i care or love i cause harm.
so now i find the words flowing out of me
in this silly poem you may never see...
why is it that I have never been able to tell you,
that my pillow time thoughts have mostly been about you...





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Re: the note i cannot write (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:56:05 AM AEST
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I really like this poem, I do relate a little though, Good write


Re: the note i cannot write (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:23:25 AM AEST
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I could certainly relate to this, i used to have this big crush on my friend and i jusr cant hel but stare and drool lol. Cool poem.

Jane x


Re: the note i cannot write (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:17:12 AM AEST
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I guess everyone can relate a bit..


Re: the note i cannot write (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:38:44 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM. RELATE TO IT 100%. Still do have a crush that i just can't tell my feelings to. maybe it's because we are friends. but what better way to start a relationship that with a strong friendship? GREAT POEM. 33


Re: the note i cannot write (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:28:50 PM AEST
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Hey, This is a Great Poem I love it, I can relate, but I did not write Him a letter..b.c my friend told him but I wish I could have wrote him a letter as great has you wrote that letter lol ^_^ well all in all GREAT WRITE !!!!!




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