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Array ( [sid] => 80939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I WANT YOU HOME... [time] => 2005-01-22 00:14:53 [hometext] => JUST CAME TO ME AND IT HURTS TO ADMIT THAT AFTER ALL IS SAID AND DONE AND ALL THE PAIN HE CAUSED, I STILL LOVE HIM... [bodytext] => I LAID AWAKE ALL NIGHT LONG
WISHING YOU WOULD QUIT BEING SO STUBBORN
AND JUST COME HOME
COME HOME AND HOLD ME CLOSE, THE WAY YOU DID B4 ALL THE PAIN WAS BORN

I CANNOT TELL YOU HOW MUCH THIS HURTS
NOR DO I HAVE THE WILL TO EVEN TRY
ALL I KNOW IS I NEED YOU TONIGHT BUT ALL I HAVE I MY OWN PILLOWS TO HOLD
I SIT STRAIGHT UP WISHING YOU COULD SEE ME CRY
MAYBE THEN YOU WOULD UNDERSTAND AND WANT TO BE HERE NOW.

I LAID AWAKE ALL NIGHT LONG
THINKING ABOUT ALL THAT I MAY HAVE DONE WRONG,
WASN'T I PRETTY ENOUGH FOR YOU, OR WAS I TOO FAT,
EITHER WAY NOTHING CHANGES BOUT ME I STILL WANT YOU BACK,
I WANT YOU HERE WITH ME SO I CAN TELL YOU ALL THE WORDS
I HAVE NOT BEEN ABLE TO SAY

THEY ALL TELL ME I'M BETTER OFF WITHOUT
AND I KNOW THAT THEY ARE RIGHT WITH NO DOUBT
BUT I STILL LOVE YOU
AND STILL WANT YOU HERE
TO WIPE AWAY EACH AND EVERY TEAR,
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I WANT YOU HOME...

Contributed by brokenwings on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:14:53 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I LAID AWAKE ALL NIGHT LONG
WISHING YOU WOULD QUIT BEING SO STUBBORN
AND JUST COME HOME
COME HOME AND HOLD ME CLOSE, THE WAY YOU DID B4 ALL THE PAIN WAS BORN

I CANNOT TELL YOU HOW MUCH THIS HURTS
NOR DO I HAVE THE WILL TO EVEN TRY
ALL I KNOW IS I NEED YOU TONIGHT BUT ALL I HAVE I MY OWN PILLOWS TO HOLD
I SIT STRAIGHT UP WISHING YOU COULD SEE ME CRY
MAYBE THEN YOU WOULD UNDERSTAND AND WANT TO BE HERE NOW.

I LAID AWAKE ALL NIGHT LONG
THINKING ABOUT ALL THAT I MAY HAVE DONE WRONG,
WASN'T I PRETTY ENOUGH FOR YOU, OR WAS I TOO FAT,
EITHER WAY NOTHING CHANGES BOUT ME I STILL WANT YOU BACK,
I WANT YOU HERE WITH ME SO I CAN TELL YOU ALL THE WORDS
I HAVE NOT BEEN ABLE TO SAY

THEY ALL TELL ME I'M BETTER OFF WITHOUT
AND I KNOW THAT THEY ARE RIGHT WITH NO DOUBT
BUT I STILL LOVE YOU
AND STILL WANT YOU HERE
TO WIPE AWAY EACH AND EVERY TEAR,

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-01-22 00:14:53]
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Re: I WANT YOU HOME... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:43:02 AM AEST
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hey,
well,i understand perfectly how u feel.you know,sometimes,you can go through the strongest storm,the hottest day out in a dessert,but nothing will change you or the way you feel,even tho u know it doesn't do u good......whatever happened,i wish the best,and dont worry,4rm what i read,i can tell u love this man more than your life,and yet u r tired,but whatever happens there's a reason for it.t/c.
love always,
andrea

Re: I WANT YOU HOME... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:24:25 AM AEST
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Hmmm i know what you mean, sometimes it so hard to let go of them that it just hurts to much to think about it. A very powerfull poem filled with such emotions.

Jane x

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