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Array ( [sid] => 80838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => STARING AT THE WATER [time] => 2005-01-21 09:39:34 [hometext] => I WONDERFUL PLACE TO BE. ONE DAY MY DREAM WILL BE REAL [bodytext] => STARING AT THE WATER

HERE I SIT JUST STARING OUT
THE WATER IS SO BLUE
THE SOUND OF THE WAVES CRASHING BELOW
THE SUN IS SETTING OFF IN THE DISTANCE
THE SEA GULLS ARE PLAYING IN THE AIR
THE LIGHTHOUSE IS BLINKING AND DRAWING ME NEAR
IF ONLY YOU WERE HERE TO
WALK WITH ME TO ENJOY THE LIGHT
THE SMELLS THE SOUNDS THE SOFT SAND
BENEATH MY FEET
MY MIND IS WHIRLING WITH THOUGHTS OF ANOTHER
TIME AND PLACE
WHEN ALL STANDS STILL AND JUST THE TWO OF US
ARE ALL THAT IS HERE
TO ENJOY ALL THE BEAUTY AROUND
TO ENJOY ALL WE HAVE TO GIVE
TO ENJOY THE PEACEFULNESS THAT SURROUNDS
JUST THE TWO OF US
TO LOUNGE TOGETHER
TO READ SOFTLY TO ONE ANOTHER
TO FILL OUR DREAMS AND FANTASIES
TO TALK LAUGH AND SHARE
MAYBE SOON
MY HEART WILL QUIT LONGING
MAYBE SOON
MAYBE TIME WILL BE MY FRIEND
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STARING AT THE WATER

Contributed by craz2 on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:39:34 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

STARING AT THE WATER

HERE I SIT JUST STARING OUT
THE WATER IS SO BLUE
THE SOUND OF THE WAVES CRASHING BELOW
THE SUN IS SETTING OFF IN THE DISTANCE
THE SEA GULLS ARE PLAYING IN THE AIR
THE LIGHTHOUSE IS BLINKING AND DRAWING ME NEAR
IF ONLY YOU WERE HERE TO
WALK WITH ME TO ENJOY THE LIGHT
THE SMELLS THE SOUNDS THE SOFT SAND
BENEATH MY FEET
MY MIND IS WHIRLING WITH THOUGHTS OF ANOTHER
TIME AND PLACE
WHEN ALL STANDS STILL AND JUST THE TWO OF US
ARE ALL THAT IS HERE
TO ENJOY ALL THE BEAUTY AROUND
TO ENJOY ALL WE HAVE TO GIVE
TO ENJOY THE PEACEFULNESS THAT SURROUNDS
JUST THE TWO OF US
TO LOUNGE TOGETHER
TO READ SOFTLY TO ONE ANOTHER
TO FILL OUR DREAMS AND FANTASIES
TO TALK LAUGH AND SHARE
MAYBE SOON
MY HEART WILL QUIT LONGING
MAYBE SOON
MAYBE TIME WILL BE MY FRIEND

Copyright © craz2 ... [ 2005-01-21 09:39:34]
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Re: STARING AT THE WATER (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:40:11 AM AEST
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This was lovely, but could we give up the caps? They work great for a title or a few words here and ther, but when it's all caps, it's hard to read.
Stitch

Re: STARING AT THE WATER (User Rating: 1 )
by dalamar on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:10:43 AM AEST
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There are no words to share is was Beautiful.

Re: STARING AT THE WATER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:33:31 AM AEST
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This is sweet, but reading all caps is hard on the eyes. Cheers!

Re: STARING AT THE WATER (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:44:20 PM AEST
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Whats with all the caps? Overall the delivery of the poem was good, cool write.

Jane x

Re: STARING AT THE WATER (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:55:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful write..Left me with a feeling of peace and tranquillity.. I think I'm going across to the beach..and stare at the water..
Thank you..
Jenni

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