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My Life With You

Contributed by Sinned on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:11:42 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



My Life With You



We met on a January new
Hearts unraveled
Each feeling blue

Each of us being drawn
Unknowing our pain inside
We danced till dawn

Mix and mingle
I promised I'd see you again
Drinks that tingle

All too soon night came to end
I walked you out under a frozen moon
Again the promise I knew I ment

I could see doubt in your eyes
Each of us knows love flees at night
I knocked on your door to my suprise

Pleased to see you ready and glad
Your mother stood and gave me that protective eye
Don't worry I won't hurt her I bade

Into my car and off we drove
My beautiful Beverly June
The night I met you began our love

Each of us had seen enough pain
Two families broken
All for the sin of passion

We felt happiness and we cried
Twenty-nine years now
In darkness old love died

Never again did we think we could smile
Beverly I hold you gently in my heart
This twenty-nine years is but a while

I Love You
Sinned





Copyright © Sinned ... [ 2005-01-21 06:11:42]
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Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:34:28 AM AEST
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I know the pain and joy of love found, broken, and restored. This is beautiful.
Stitch


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:11:46 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful testament to your love.


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:59:51 AM AEST
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What a emotionally write, for the love felt. Beautiful....Sweet how someone can love that deep and be loved back.
Brew~


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:19:40 PM AEST
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WoW, this was just absolutely beautiful! Great write!! TD


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:00:28 PM AEST
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granpa that was a great poem.very sweet.i loved it.i hope you actually show granma this lol.

***Missy***aka flicker----sinned's granddaughter


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:14:23 PM AEST
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a heart warming peice of writting wish u both well .

Dorian Chambers


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:46:07 PM AEST
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May your love grow double everyday...especially if you keep writing such beauty.


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:44:15 PM AEST
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this is so heartfelt....so beautiful...what a sweet thing to do for someone who you have shared 29 yrs. with....Shari


Re: My Life With You (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:57:38 PM AEST
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do you write on another site....am just curious....name is familar....Shari




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