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do you hear the sorrow in my cries?
I cannot shed my tears
I try and run from hidden fears
alone I sit and alone I cry
and curse the word how full it is of lies
always saying "you will be ok"sorrow can't last to long
but I seem to just prove them wrong

see this despair in my eyes?
hear the doubt in my cries?
in the mirror I point and laugh
**** this world I cut my whist in half
I care not what I do
nor the human race, not even you
I am to weak it seems
I shed my blood so carelessly

see the hate in my eyes
hear my sorrow in my cries
With hate and pain I have made a pact
to get revenge, stab society in it's back
now i'll have the final laugh
with one swift swing I cut your neck in half
having had my vengeful way
I now have company in my pain filled days
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My pain

Contributed by socialmisfit on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:56:07 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

See the pain in my eyes?
do you hear the sorrow in my cries?
I cannot shed my tears
I try and run from hidden fears
alone I sit and alone I cry
and curse the word how full it is of lies
always saying "you will be ok"sorrow can't last to long
but I seem to just prove them wrong

see this despair in my eyes?
hear the doubt in my cries?
in the mirror I point and laugh
**** this world I cut my whist in half
I care not what I do
nor the human race, not even you
I am to weak it seems
I shed my blood so carelessly

see the hate in my eyes
hear my sorrow in my cries
With hate and pain I have made a pact
to get revenge, stab society in it's back
now i'll have the final laugh
with one swift swing I cut your neck in half
having had my vengeful way
I now have company in my pain filled days

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-01-21 00:56:07]
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Re: My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:58:28 AM AEST
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wow an amazing emotioal write.if you ever ned to talk let me know.great write.take care

Re: My pain (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:22:18 AM AEST
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this is a powerful write...and believe me i can relate to ur despair......this is very sad and i pray this is only a poem and these feelings will pass. but uve described what ur feeling in an awesome way...its very touching.
hugs n hope

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