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You break me
Open for only you to see
Behind the walls of lies
That barricade my cries
From being heard by anyone

You leave me
Broken for only you to be
The one that tries
To see my with more than eyes
And you see that I am someone

That never got a chance in life

You never piece me together
Because the pieces are best left undone
The walls no longer shelter
Me from the pain given by everyone

You piece my trust together
With everything that you've done
The pieces lay over there
From the broken no one

That I had become

You broke me open
With the shell that's broken [comments] => 7 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Pieces

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:36:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Pieces

You break me
Open for only you to see
Behind the walls of lies
That barricade my cries
From being heard by anyone

You leave me
Broken for only you to be
The one that tries
To see my with more than eyes
And you see that I am someone

That never got a chance in life

You never piece me together
Because the pieces are best left undone
The walls no longer shelter
Me from the pain given by everyone

You piece my trust together
With everything that you've done
The pieces lay over there
From the broken no one

That I had become

You broke me open
With the shell that's broken

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-20 21:36:37]
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Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:42:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful,you have such a way with words,I really enjoy your poetry.

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:57:24 PM AEST
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You know if this is about something someone did to you..Can I kcik their ass please..But anyhow this is again damnitt.your showing me up i think..This is amazing Jennifer..Do I need to work harder?

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:03:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, E-9
Jenni

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:39:30 PM AEST
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I loved it, every bit of it. Every thing fits together so great...Im jealous ;)

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:55:00 PM AEST
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This works very well and the last line was surprising and fit in nicely. Good job! Cheers!

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:41:34 AM AEST
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Ok I was a tad to slow here I guess then..Took me a second run..

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:56:23 AM AEST
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Very well written post..I would imagine this person who you write of has a impact on your mind in some way..Good work.

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