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[sid] => 80789
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[aid] => mick
[title] => tramp
[time] => 2005-01-20 21:07:09
[hometext] => this is my first poem in a long time. could you tell me your comments or anyway i can improve my writing. i can handle opinions.
[bodytext] => the passion painted in black ink words gentle, yet messy cross outs and squiggles the pen searches for a distinct word failing… but still writes exhilarating and intoxicating writing rapid thoughts brimming onto the white virgin excited from the surge words keep flowing hoping to reach an intense revelation finally, the height of this delight a moment of pride and rest the hand is tired and mind exhausted satisfied, the pen stops to begin again on a new white sheet, another dose of words to ease the craving [comments] => 2 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 48 [informant] => littlemo911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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