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It's candy to my ears.
I don't know what I did.
But it's something I no longer hear.
A little after lunch,
My girlfriend buttoned up
She smiles at me
And she kisses me,
But she refuses to speak.
I don't mean to nit-pick.
But I doubt she's really mad
Like I said, she kisses me,
Which I don't THINK
She would do if she was upset.
I tried tickling her,
Pinching her,
Just to get a squeak.
But her will power is too strong.
I don't know what I did.
I would rather she had
Stopped kissing me
Than to stop talking.
I miss her voice.
I don't know why it's gone.
If she could tell me,
That would be GREAT. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => sir_odd87 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Silent Girlfriend

Contributed by sir_odd87 on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:37:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I love the sound of her voice.
It's candy to my ears.
I don't know what I did.
But it's something I no longer hear.
A little after lunch,
My girlfriend buttoned up
She smiles at me
And she kisses me,
But she refuses to speak.
I don't mean to nit-pick.
But I doubt she's really mad
Like I said, she kisses me,
Which I don't THINK
She would do if she was upset.
I tried tickling her,
Pinching her,
Just to get a squeak.
But her will power is too strong.
I don't know what I did.
I would rather she had
Stopped kissing me
Than to stop talking.
I miss her voice.
I don't know why it's gone.
If she could tell me,
That would be GREAT.

Copyright © sir_odd87 ... [ 2005-01-20 19:37:53]
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Re: The Silent Girlfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:07:33 PM AEST
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Great poem. I hope she will start talking to you soon.

Spazzo

Re: The Silent Girlfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:26:34 PM AEST
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That is like me and my boyfriend. Great Write!
=Jen=
P.S.
Write back!(if you want to)

Re: The Silent Girlfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:11:04 PM AEST
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Very inept post to be quite honest

Re: The Silent Girlfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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Hi! I really really thought this poem was wonderful very well told and smooth words n flowing:)

-Care-

Re: The Silent Girlfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:50:58 AM AEST
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if he thinks its inept you and he should read mine, very well written.
give me a shout.

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