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For I’m their all, I’m their queen
But queen of what? I ask myself
They obviously don't know me well

They strum their lutes and whistle flutes
As I notice something strange
In the corner of my eye, it seems,
The world is up in flames

No one here can see it
No one here but me
I feel alone in the crowd
Why won’t it let me be?

I tell them everything will be alright
They’ll get everything they desire
But in the back of my mind
I see someone burning in a fire

The smell of smoke suffocates me
The fire burns in my blood
Someone must know my secret
The end is soon to come [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ataraxia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fire In The Distance

Contributed by Ataraxia on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:02:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

They all bow down before me
For I’m their all, I’m their queen
But queen of what? I ask myself
They obviously don't know me well

They strum their lutes and whistle flutes
As I notice something strange
In the corner of my eye, it seems,
The world is up in flames

No one here can see it
No one here but me
I feel alone in the crowd
Why won’t it let me be?

I tell them everything will be alright
They’ll get everything they desire
But in the back of my mind
I see someone burning in a fire

The smell of smoke suffocates me
The fire burns in my blood
Someone must know my secret
The end is soon to come

Copyright Â© Ataraxia ... [ 2005-01-20 19:02:42]
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Re: Fire In The Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:33:16 PM AEST
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i really liked this one....i feel like its hiding something..im trying to figure it out....great job

Re: Fire In The Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:08:27 PM AEST
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This is a strange story, but interesting - especially at the ending. Makes me wonder what the secret is. Nice write. Cheers!

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