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Array ( [sid] => 80750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (Forbidden to the one you want) [time] => 2005-01-20 17:40:42 [hometext] => hi i made this poem for one of my close friends please post comments and thoughts it helps my writing a gate deal [bodytext] => (Forbidden to the one you want)
are love is forbidden yes I know but for that I love you even though
are love will always be there are society isn’t fair
are love for each other a love we both hold is strong it will never be gone
as others disappear are bond is true not like the short ones that melt with the snow
are love is here are love will stay no matter what society has to say we will love each other until both are dieing day
but even after then in the next life of so we will find each other again and right away we will know
because are love is here are love is there are love is every ware
I have a dieing pain in my heart each time we must be apart
but I know are love is true even though we must hide it for now until we meet again I will always love you
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(Forbidden to the one you want)

Contributed by blackrose233 on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:40:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

(Forbidden to the one you want)
are love is forbidden yes I know but for that I love you even though
are love will always be there are society isn’t fair
are love for each other a love we both hold is strong it will never be gone
as others disappear are bond is true not like the short ones that melt with the snow
are love is here are love will stay no matter what society has to say we will love each other until both are dieing day
but even after then in the next life of so we will find each other again and right away we will know
because are love is here are love is there are love is every ware
I have a dieing pain in my heart each time we must be apart
but I know are love is true even though we must hide it for now until we meet again I will always love you

Copyright Â© blackrose233 ... [ 2005-01-20 17:40:42]
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Re: (Forbidden to the one you want) (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:47:55 PM AEST
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It's a really good poem, my only advice is edit it! You say "are" but it would read better as "our". It's a truly great poem tho!!! Keep writing!

Re: (Forbidden to the one you want) (User Rating: 1 )
by Marisa_A_Sydney on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:15:53 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem. the expression is great! keep up the good work.
marisa.

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