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Array ( [sid] => 80712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Disruption of Happiness [time] => 2005-01-20 13:06:19 [hometext] => A rather vulgar look at love. Please do not read if easily offended, [bodytext] => You have some cheek to stand there and say you love me,
Putting warm arms around me,
Inflaming my senses,
Planting lon deep kisses into my confused mouth,
How dare you.
I will die alone in a bed,
The victim of a festering tumour,
Gasping black soaked, raggedy, hitched gulps of ever decreasing air,
Smelling of rotting flesh
Spilled ***** dried clinging to a wrinkly arse,
Blood in my urine,
Lumps in my skin,
Yellowing teeth,
In a drooling mouth,
Blind eyes,
Deaf ears,
Brain leaking,
A cold slap of meat on a ***** soaked bed,
If you can love me now love that,
Don’t interrupt my dark misery,
With false dawns,
To hold you now is to see the crime of mortality,
I love you too.
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The Disruption of Happiness

Contributed by Blackevar on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:06:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You have some cheek to stand there and say you love me,
Putting warm arms around me,
Inflaming my senses,
Planting lon deep kisses into my confused mouth,
How dare you.
I will die alone in a bed,
The victim of a festering tumour,
Gasping black soaked, raggedy, hitched gulps of ever decreasing air,
Smelling of rotting flesh
Spilled ***** dried clinging to a wrinkly arse,
Blood in my urine,
Lumps in my skin,
Yellowing teeth,
In a drooling mouth,
Blind eyes,
Deaf ears,
Brain leaking,
A cold slap of meat on a ***** soaked bed,
If you can love me now love that,
Don’t interrupt my dark misery,
With false dawns,
To hold you now is to see the crime of mortality,
I love you too.

Copyright Â© Blackevar ... [ 2005-01-20 13:06:19]
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Re: The Disruption of Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Azul_Panther on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:11:25 PM AEST
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dang, that is a very cool way of seeing love. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more

Re: The Disruption of Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:06:28 PM AEST
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Rather gross but yeah I guess we'll all have to deal with that sort of stuff in the person we love if we live long enough to experience them
like that.

Makes ya think, made me think of my grandparents having sex or something to that effect. Quite a disturbing picture, but I'm not offended. Regardless if I was or not, this is good writing.

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