Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:51:17 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 80698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My own fairy tail [time] => 2005-01-20 10:28:49 [hometext] => this is kinda a childish poem but whatever, also there is so many words that are not spelled right sorry [bodytext] => I'm in a world with crystal water falls, and castles.
In my room I lay in a bed of tassels.
Waiting for my prince charming.
I look out the window, and see dwarves farming, and a knight jousting,
and girls in waiting swooning over him.
I relax and think of the sweet kiss my prince will give me to win my affection.
I heard a stone hit my window and it got my attettion.
My prince had finaaly came, but first the dragon to tame.
Afterwards he climbed up the vines like in Shakespars time,
and his lips touched mine, then my alarm clock went off, it was nine.

Time to get up and face the real world, with all its despair.
These people do not live in castles but in boxes,
and lie in a bed of dirt not tassels
Its all so unfair
No dragons to tame, nothing but money to obtain.
and well my prince will not come and show his affection,
for he is locked up, his rights afflicted.
Its sad to know that this is my life, but
I can always dream of this fairy tail scean.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 40 [informant] => deepdarkthinker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

My own fairy tail

Contributed by deepdarkthinker on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:28:49 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I'm in a world with crystal water falls, and castles.
In my room I lay in a bed of tassels.
Waiting for my prince charming.
I look out the window, and see dwarves farming, and a knight jousting,
and girls in waiting swooning over him.
I relax and think of the sweet kiss my prince will give me to win my affection.
I heard a stone hit my window and it got my attettion.
My prince had finaaly came, but first the dragon to tame.
Afterwards he climbed up the vines like in Shakespars time,
and his lips touched mine, then my alarm clock went off, it was nine.

Time to get up and face the real world, with all its despair.
These people do not live in castles but in boxes,
and lie in a bed of dirt not tassels
Its all so unfair
No dragons to tame, nothing but money to obtain.
and well my prince will not come and show his affection,
for he is locked up, his rights afflicted.
Its sad to know that this is my life, but
I can always dream of this fairy tail scean.

Copyright © deepdarkthinker ... [ 2005-01-20 10:28:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: My own fairy tail (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:56:34 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

There are many out there who long for that fairy tale dream to come true. For the longest time I thought that fabled knight would show his face but then reality settled in. Nice image to hold in one's heart but don't let it cloud your judgment.

peace
TS

Re: My own fairy tail (User Rating: 1 )
by tiny_mo on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:26:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I think that it is a good thing to be dreaming of your own little fairy tail...otherwise life would seem too dull and boring. Great poem keep it up.

Mo

Re: My own fairy tail (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:35:22 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I really liked your use of rhymn. I'm not being picky, but take a look at lthe line that reads, "My prince had finally came." Should be come.

Re: My own fairy tail (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:36:32 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I meant to add that I really like your poem.

Re: My own fairy tail (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 02:48:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow!
This started off as what seemed to be a happy fantasy poem,
then takes an unexpected turn.
I love it, very original, and the poem itself is beautifully crafted.
Well done!!!

--Katie

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com