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Array ( [sid] => 8069 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Force in the Bathroom [time] => 2002-12-06 16:00:00 [hometext] => Ok, this is a little on the morbid side, I know. This poem is about rape. To me it was more about the details in this fictious event. I'm not condoning it here- just simply being 'artistic' in my description. [bodytext] => The echoing drops of blood
Squeeze their way to fear
A voice, begging no
The devil-- on a journey
Screams of mother nature
Expert withdrawls
But moment in waiting
Is not secured
Love shaft
A mean, burning thrust
Brain colored violations
White Blood
He rubs his chest
Sweating fur, he smiles at her
"I'm not that kind of guy."
Tangled hair
She's in despair
And the nightmare isn't over
Black hole closing
Forceful indenture
Easing through
Bruising desires
Brain bleeds, head on fire
With no remorse
For this night of fear
He drains her tears
An evil smell
Whispers, "We have won."
Defeated you in battle,
but the WAR...
Has just begun
Master Victory
For confusion shall soon soak
The oppressors with a dry taste of doom [comments] => 5 [counter] => 384 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Elisabeth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Force in the Bathroom

Contributed by Elisabeth on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



The echoing drops of blood
Squeeze their way to fear
A voice, begging no
The devil-- on a journey
Screams of mother nature
Expert withdrawls
But moment in waiting
Is not secured
Love shaft
A mean, burning thrust
Brain colored violations
White Blood
He rubs his chest
Sweating fur, he smiles at her
"I'm not that kind of guy."
Tangled hair
She's in despair
And the nightmare isn't over
Black hole closing
Forceful indenture
Easing through
Bruising desires
Brain bleeds, head on fire
With no remorse
For this night of fear
He drains her tears
An evil smell
Whispers, "We have won."
Defeated you in battle,
but the WAR...
Has just begun
Master Victory
For confusion shall soon soak
The oppressors with a dry taste of doom




Copyright © Elisabeth ... [ 2002-12-06 16:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Force in the Bathroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Knowledge on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:11:13 PM AEST
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intense...


Re: The Force in the Bathroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 07:43:41 PM AEST
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Wow...that's like, good. Lol...I've got no words to describe your talent. This poem is amazing.


Re: The Force in the Bathroom (User Rating: 1 )
by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 02:29:04 PM AEST
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~very good you got a talent
take advantage of it~


~britteny~


Re: The Force in the Bathroom (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:57:36 PM AEST
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I'm glad this is fictional, rape is in no way anything to be beautifully looked at. It's very hurtful to one's soul and not just for a day or a week or month or year, it affects rape victims such as myself the rest of our very lives. Thanks for sharing this one it's good to read somthing in this manner every once in a while, because it takes me a little deeper than any other poems do and makes me realize just how far i've come in dealing with this situation.
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: The Force in the Bathroom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 01:00:43 AM AEST
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Holy *****!!! That is intense! Artistic indeed.




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