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Array ( [sid] => 80614 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Siren's Enticing Call [time] => 2005-01-19 19:34:48 [hometext] => ok- this poem is not about me!! it's just about people who are thinking of suicide and this a message to them... [bodytext] => It crumbles faster with every second wasted
The inside liquids are flowing faster than expected
Eyes fluttering with every drop of rain
It's horrific and unimaginable, this permanet bloody stain

It was planned to every moment, every detail of sacrifice
The pain is nothing as much of heart frozen in ice
When it take a certain view to see its natural beauty
Then it has become an eulogy for the times diversity

The hands are purple, colder than ice itself
The sickness is uncurable, the most uncommon health
Is it the answer, or the simple quick fix?
The balance of life and death of the hell and heaven mix [comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 36 [informant] => monus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Siren's Enticing Call

Contributed by monus on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:34:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

It crumbles faster with every second wasted
The inside liquids are flowing faster than expected
Eyes fluttering with every drop of rain
It's horrific and unimaginable, this permanet bloody stain

It was planned to every moment, every detail of sacrifice
The pain is nothing as much of heart frozen in ice
When it take a certain view to see its natural beauty
Then it has become an eulogy for the times diversity

The hands are purple, colder than ice itself
The sickness is uncurable, the most uncommon health
Is it the answer, or the simple quick fix?
The balance of life and death of the hell and heaven mix

Copyright © monus ... [ 2005-01-19 19:34:48]
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Re: Siren's Enticing Call (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:57:54 PM AEST
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Your poem speaks the truth, I really cant say it helps me, though it was writen to suicide thinking people so i guess i must at least say
Thank you...

Re: Siren's Enticing Call (User Rating: 1 )
by Supergurl1071 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:40:10 PM AEST
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Awesome poem!!!! Wow, very powerful and your word choice and rhyming is incredible! I could really feel what you were feeling and that's not something that can easily be done. You have a gift, keep on writing and I hope things get better for you, really I do. Keep using this as an outlet, it helps.

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