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You make me want to die
I watch you forget me
While you just pass me by

It hurts to see you happy
Happy without us
You're the only one I want
My heart's still full of lust

"Of course I still love you-"
You said, "How could I not?"
But you said you didn't want to 'hurt' again
I'd just like to say Thanks a lot

Because how could you hurt
If you're with the one you love?
How could you feel pain
If it's me that you dream of?

Thinking these things over
I realize your words may not have been true
And though you may not love me
I will still love you.
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Emotional Epiphamy

Contributed by broken_soul08 on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:32:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You refuse to look at me
You make me want to die
I watch you forget me
While you just pass me by

It hurts to see you happy
Happy without us
You're the only one I want
My heart's still full of lust

"Of course I still love you-"
You said, "How could I not?"
But you said you didn't want to 'hurt' again
I'd just like to say Thanks a lot

Because how could you hurt
If you're with the one you love?
How could you feel pain
If it's me that you dream of?

Thinking these things over
I realize your words may not have been true
And though you may not love me
I will still love you.

Copyright © broken_soul08 ... [ 2005-01-19 19:32:31]
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Re: Emotional Epiphamy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST
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Great write!! I can really relate, as I have felt this way before. You're better off without him though. :-)

Re: Emotional Epiphamy (User Rating: 1 )
by Sigma-Phi on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:57:08 PM AEST
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Good poem. I always feel that writting helps to deal with life's everyday obstacles. I hope writting this poem helped you to release some pressures. Don't let him get the best of you. It seems you have a lot to offer someone who will return the same. Whomever hurt you this way, is not worthy of your love. Good expressions!

Re: Emotional Epiphamy (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:49:43 AM AEST
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Great poem. Writing for me helps me to work things out.

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