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In The End
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:28:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm lonesome and broken
I'm nothing and no one
Whats the point of trying to lie
In the end, I want to die
I've lost myself and my voice
It's not my fault, it was'nt my choice
Why does it always end this way
In the end, A coffin I shall lay
I'm alive and this wound is opening
I'm tired and death I'm hopeing
When will be my final day
In the end, you have nothing to say
I'm fallen and I'm forgotten
I'm calling becouse I'm rotten
Something I have to get off my chest
In the end, I'll be layed to rest
I've called to say, this will be the day
My insicurities have numbed me
This pain has finally sucumbed me
Please... don't cry
I've wanted to die
It's now the end
Good Bye
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ForeverAlone
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2005-01-19 17:28:27]
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Re: In The End
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:06:31 PM AEST
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whoa ! i really like this poem ! it shows great emotions ! i hope you are not actually considering to die because life always gets better in the end .. keep writing because i really like your style !!
love to you -
Xx luckie _ lynn xX |
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Re: In The End
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by dragondaughter on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:11:39 PM AEST
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wow...nothing like taking the reader through a walk in the woods, stabbing them in the back and twisting the knife for good measure...a very powerful piece of work...wow...
I'd hate to never be able to read another one of your works if you chose that ending...t'would be a sad day for poets...wonderful piece the emotion is astounding…and the flow well done…
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Re: In The End
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:13:34 PM AEST
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| superb writing and poem in every single way. entrancing from the first line to the last. i would copy and paste, my favorite parts, but then id copy and paste the entire poem... |
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